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    Hay posted a long review but it did not post due to login. I'll summarize, adding side topics or stories or ugh flashbacks can help flesh out characters more. Even tho I do understand she is smart and resourcefull and that she's into superheroes, anime and justice perhaps adding some graduating class awards would point out that shes gifted so much that building Ai and tech is easy to her or perhaps even a natural gift. I do know this story is pitched to romance involvement, it's because of its synopsis rather than the chapter buildup until now, but I do suspect chapter 4 is going towards that.

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