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Terra_Parker

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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
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    This story has a lot of potential but the dialogue is so poorly written that it's almost painful to read. A skilled editor cutting out about 30% of the words and tightening the phrases would bring it from a good idea to an enjoyable read.

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    D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
    Fantasy · Vongrak
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Replied to Obekiwi

    Killing nobles is never evil, it's a public service, just like killing landlords

    Ch 11 Encounters
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Posted

    Not many novels keep my interest for hundreds of chapters but this one did. I'm hooked on the characters and plot, and while the writing could use a second proofreading pass and some light editing it's not bad enough to get in the way of the story. Among the better web novels I've read, almost on par with Death Mage.

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    Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
    Fantasy · Reili
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Posted

    A bizarre mix of White Wolf style magical realism, dimension-hopping fantasy, and cultivation novel that somehow works because of the lively prose and lovable characters. I'm not big into Xianxia stuff but this story has more than enough on offer to appeal to people outside that genre's usual readership.

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    Mage And Wolf
    Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Commented

    Loving the anti-imperialist stuff, good riddance to the US and Washington

    Ch 51 Chapter 51
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    Mage And Wolf
    Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Commented

    You're really going ham on the Death Mage system huh? Not that I mind, it's a good one, and the rest of the story is... different enough, anyway, to be interesting. I'm looking forward to see how the story's "voice" develops more later.

    Ch 10 Side Chapter: The Peaceful Evergreen Village and the Hardworking Boy
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    Demon Queen Rebirth: I Reincarnated as a Living Armor?!
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Terra_Parker
    Terra_Parker2yr
    Replied to Daemanuel

    I think it is a parody, sort of like Instant Death where it's a sixty-isekai pileup. The main character is cunning and immortal but not overpowered, so it's likely that the victories he wins will be through tricking people rather than brute force

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    I was Summoned as a Hero, but I Became the Demon Lord Instead
    Fantasy · KiraMinoru
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