That's okay. How exactly is my Mc cliche? You do realize that if I gave The mc chakra on top of all of his cheats, the story wouldn't make sense. His cheats alone allow him at base level to stand toe to toe with a Jounin, and potentially way stronger. This is a BOXING novel, and the Mc is going to only use boxing. So giving Him jutsu wouldn't make sense. This is inherently bad criticism because you didn't expand on anything. Otherwise, have a good day.

That's fair, I mean I did say in the description that the interactions would be cliche, and you clicked the story and read it. Who's fault is that? 🤔 If that's your opinion that's okay, but others I know certainly think differently. Thank you for your honest review!

Usually I wouldn't reply to reviews in spite, but you said my "grammer" is nothing special when you didn't even spell the word right, along with several spelling mistakes within your review. Based off of this, it seems like you don't know enough basic english grammar rules to even begin to criticize my grammar 😂

Yes

yes, this is an original. I posted it in the fanfic section because later on I'll introduce some concepts from other animes, but other than that the characters are completely original

New chapter coming later today ‼️✍️

This was very intelligently answered and explained. I like this.

Lloyd

I like this very much🤳👏

Are you seriously justifying causing someone to be an orphan, causing a whole fucking world war, because of this one bitch obito? Miss me with that "I understand" bullshit because if you were a normal human you wouldn't.

Don't you dare call me a sick f*** you sick f***.