Legacy_Spellsword

huh for a moment i was thinking of a different Okkara, with an insane lantern squatting in a cave

ah i missed this, Icarus make a pseudo Rhongomyniad through Atlas as well as everything else just reminds me how much i missed this story

honestly tjis could a very great story but it falls terribly due to so many factors, first is the unneccedary censorship that pretty much takes out huge chunks of the story, next is the broken grammar that takes the immersion out. third is how some of the lines repeat themselves over and over again. it makes it seem so low quality that it makes all the other aspects of the story seem nonexistent.

seriously? why are things censored? its annoying and ruins stories. if your gonna make a dark story like this dont censor.

honestly censorship like this ruins the flow and is absolutely unneccesary

honestly im surprised Athena isnt reacting to him having a reference of Gaia in one of his skills

im surprised Freya/Syr hasnt seen Avalon residing within his soul yet. has it been removed from him?

or outcome 3 is that the game system has no games like the ps3

this seems to always happen with actual good unique stories, always dropped and never picked up again. So many stories that have great unique ideas that nobody else has really picked up on are left to rot and i really hate that.

this is one thing i hate about most webnovels, lack of proper grammar. it ruins the pace of the story and makes high tension scenes lose all traction and just makes it seem low effort