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Longevity is last of the worries in the supernatural world. Like literally everyone can get to live much longer than they are allowed especially in dc world. As for dragon ball world, You just need dragon ball to increase your life span
I partially agree with you because you have to consider which world you're in. In our world, he should tell Pepper, but it's a supernatural world where many entities can easily hear things like this. I don't even want to think about what would happen to the MC in that case. If you want to give him plot armor for this, then it's your choice.
Nah may she never rest in peace
But you are not replying as much as you replied earlier. Just simply liking the comment.
Imagine mc standing in front of them like this:
I know how difficult it is to write the edited version of MTL. I tried it myself, and it took me three hours just for one chapter. It looks easy, but it's not, not by a huge margin.
I don't mean it that way but as of sibling relationship. It's a dream come true for any younger sibling to suddenly become older than their big sibling, just so that they can back at them for all the teasing they've endured. Especially now that the mc have experienced this in the simulation
I made a reply, please see it
It's just that the way you're doing it isn't working well. He suddenly becomes too comfortable with the changes in his personality. No one would be okay with their personality changing so drastically. They would experience a real-life crisis, just as Danzo did when he found out he was a character in an anime. Like here, his first thought is to manipulate him, but any normal person would not have that thought.
Sigh..
It's not a small influence
DANZO
Let me correct that : The hero will make the righteous decision FOR EVERYONE, but the villain will sacrifice his morality for the future FOR HIMSELF.
You should have also written: 'Now I will play the role of the big brother to her, and I will teach her a lesson in our sparring session. Hehe... sweet little revenge.'
Stop him by speaking Rin name in front of him.
How much weak a saiyan is shown in this mann
This is good, but you can make this much better. If this is written properly then it can easily cover 2 chapters