Well... this is nice. I was browsing the dark tags and found this. The pacing is good, almost deceptive. Like, it started mediocre and became great. Though there is a huge problem in this novel, its the action scenes. It ends too quickly and that sucks, for me at least. I like action scenes too much, and since this is a fantasy, this should have more descriptive action scenes. It makes the deaths feel useless and without purpose. But you make up for great story telling. Chapter 8 is the most recent release and that was amazing. You should put more fairy tale like mini stories in this.