Hello author here! The things that I'll write here and on the auxiliary chapter isn't much different but I'll write it anyway. ( I need an excuse to rate this book five stars) I am new to writing, and I strive to be better, so constructive criticism and suggestions about what I should improve about is absolutely welcomed! of course I also strive to be better too but things that I see that I should improve and things that you guys see that needs improvement can be different so that's why your feedback is necessary. that is all thank you and enjoy!