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No I do not remember reading the story and have thought whatever you said I stole was original, though I believe I did say I was basing it off of other books of this type. As far as I now I have not stolen anything, but can you please tell me what you think I stole and let me know so I can give credit or redo it.
I fixed it and thank you for the tip.
I will take that into account, I will do so by introducing some characters stories wise he will not know to compromise to try and fix the problem you have introduced to me. I will not change it know but I hope the compromise I introduced will hopefully fix the problem you introduced. sorry if the comments may seem repetitive but this is how I will answer, sorry if they are also too long.
I will not change the intro as I think it is ingrained into my perception of this character as it gives a mystical and clairvoyant quality to him. However, I will introduce some characters I know, but story wise he will not. I will get him a cat though as cats are awesome. thanks for the comment with your suggestions.
I do not understand what you mean, can you please elaborate on your post please so if there is a problem I can fix it, please and thank you.
I will take your advice into consideration and I thank you sir for the advice of my writing style.