Astra_D_Satella

Book Title = The last lights War : The fall of the Righteous Rating = 8/10 Plot = Good Story flow = kinda hard to follow. Other wise rating would 10/10. Favorite Chapter : chap 2 Favorite Character : Abel 3 things I liked : 1) The plot is hard to follow but when you understand it it's pretty good. 2) Mc power 3) Power ranking System of the world in the novel. 3 Things I didnt like: 1) I am not into harem and stuff so yah... 2) Also not into romance. 3) story flow is Too quick. Actual review The novel was good. But the story flow is too quick. Unlike other cliche novels where the story and world building takes place step by step , here it's too fast. Over all the story was good. This is just my opinion that I think You explained the novel like you are writing a manhwa and the flow is too quick (Cause you are not seeing any pics just the text)

Tomé algunas referencias de otros manga y las introduje en este fanfic.

flying gravity And Dark magic

yes

i will after i am done with exams.

mhm i will try tomake it better i guess

she does but i added more kingdoms than original soo she is in elroe labyrinth and mc is in alasca which is quite far away from each other