RzgarKurdmann
He says, "my lord, send me back".
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RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to HansDojoI have no more, thanks for the chat! ♡
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection.- RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to HansDojo
I see, well, I hope you enjoy earth, I am originally from here so I am a native and no incarnator, have fun while you last here!
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection. - RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to HansDojo
Bro you making me cry harder after each comment, I hope that she is safe, but are your species more intellegent than us humans???
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection. - RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to HansDojo
That's sad, how did you die???
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection. - RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to HansDojo
I am a kind soul, death is not beutiful.
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection. - RzgarKurdmann2yrPosted
I just wanted to let you know... I am no experienced writer, before writing this I had read and watched lots of shows and see how their characters react, create plots, fight scenes and etc... I would say in a storyline I did very well and plot too, I have couple of plots and plot twists in the novel. The novel will probably end between 25 and 30 chapters, it is just for a contest. I am bad with female characters and showing their emotions. two heads are working on this novel. I am bad with dialogues and try to show you only the most important things. I also write the only important things to the story, whatever happens off screen will be given a small explaining. I write short fights, because they are more realistic, I watched some anime but their facts are kind of unreal it takes long there is open spaces to attack which they don't use and etc.. simply we keep everything or try to keep everything realistic as possible. Please leave a review, thanks for reading. -Rzgar -Nawaf
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommented
The Sitting plan.
The students, each took their places to sit down, later when the bell rang, came Relik back to them, "Interesting choice of sitting, the punks sat behind as I thought, the hard girls but with beauty sat before them, the strongest boys in the middle next to a beautiful girl and the smartest but not the strongest in the front section, they are who I thought they would be", thought Relik to himself as he stood before them. - RzgarKurdmann2yrCommentedCh 1 Vincent Agius
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommentedTrisha teased Vincent by waving the book in front of him a few times with a sly smirk on her face. After enjoying her tease, Trisha hid it once again.
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommented
Yo this made me sad... :-(
The library had a long day open, but his mind was elsewhere. Every Sunday, Tessy would bring food to her daughter-in-law since after a year ago, Kevin had passed away from the side effect of his infection. - RzgarKurdmann2yrCommentedVincent would sometimes help Kevin's family at the library to exchange cheap rent and a small wage while receiving a special government fund for mutated people. A nice bonus for the shy introvert Vincent.
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommented
let me guess 🙄 ...
It was a special day for Vincent as he hummed a joyous tune waiting for the traffic lights to display green. His destination was the library Kevin and his family owned. - RzgarKurdmann2yrCommentedIn the present day, the gentle breeze of the winter wind was cool lightly brushing against his face.
- RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to Cj_Vyskocil
lol 😂😂😂, I just commented on it.
Thirteen years after the mysterious infection that killed tens of thousands of people, Vincent Agius became 25 years old. He became a skinny young adult with short brown hair and unique green eyes. - RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to Cj_VyskocilKevin's warm smile was slowly melting the frozen heart of the fourteen-year-old Vincent.
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommented
I would say he might have a special genetic which was created by the merge of his parents Gen, which made him survive and that might be the case for the 10% procent survive, they are special or I am just saying nonsense here 😂
Vincent was among the few survivors with no negative mutated side effects. The only noticeable change in his body were his eyes as their color changed to green. Soon after, he fainted in his infected dying parent's arms as they protected him until their last breath. - RzgarKurdmann2yrReplied to KLD
😂😂😂
This paragraph has been deleted. - RzgarKurdmann2yrCommentedThere was a girl in my class, very beautiful; her name was Lily; I think I fell in love with her, I was attracted to her bubbly personality and her nature. But I was not one to express my inner feelings, so I just kept them to myself and studied hard just as I did in my previous school.
- RzgarKurdmann2yrCommented
They look up to them, until they become a monkey Altered 🐒
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I like how he uses a new concept and not a mutant, nice.
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