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[img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar]Very good. It perfectly combines elements of Worm and Star Wars without limiting either world. Magnificent battles and accurate reactions. I highly recommend it.

(Continuing the rest of the previous comment)I like that he's joining the Sky faction, to be honest. But as a true leader? Or in a more liberal way? He occupies a freer position because he has human blood. And Michael declares him to Human Inquisitor. He's not from his faction, but at the same time, he has power within it. In this world, I think Angels and Demons are either weaker or stronger because they don't face opposition from other pantheons. But they are dangerous on a dimensional level. 3. The Crystal Throne, interesting something for the Fae. The true magic of that place is interesting. But Sara J. Maas's Saga is interesting. But the Throne of Roses and Thorns is better. The cauldron that can turn a human or any other race into Fae. I think it would be perfect for Artoria, since a Fae from Sara's world has ridiculously god-like power in some cases. And they have enormous magical power in one element. For example, Rhysand, who has amazing power over shadows. 4.Claymore. A somewhat forgotten anime. But very interesting for the Yonki. There's so much potential in the Claymore women and some of their monsters. The Hyper Regeneration in that world is absurd. Pryscilla demonstrates this by regenerating at "light speed." An encounter between Teresa and William would be interesting. I feel that William has neglected his sword training. Since the Scáthach arc, we haven't had a martial arts master. Their encounters are more affectionate. And although Teresa is theoretically weaker than William, that woman had an absurd talent for battle and power that would reach the Supreme or Ultimate level if it awakened. Their encounter would be interesting for William because it would remind him that he's been lax in that aspect. And I have several ladies from that world for William if you wish. 1. Islanzadi, the Elf Queen. She reminds me of Salem in her coldness because of everything she's been through. 2. Maryse Trueblood, given that her husband is gay, but they were forced to marry because of the stupidity of their society. I have no doubt she followed William, hahaha. And technically she's a MILF, given the beauty of her daughter. And if William were to be the father of several children, hahaha... 3. There are many interesting Fae ladies, to be honest. 4. I'm a fan of Galatea, to be honest. She's a strong and interesting female character, and technically she's a nun, hahaha. There are other stories. I like Fate, and in a way, thanks to you, I have more information about that world since I was unaware of some of the lore. Damn, thanks for your story. I enjoyed it a lot, and the real world has been awful lately. But you brightened my day, so to speak. I hope you'll consider these worlds. But thank you very much, best regards.

I'm not sure if this is the best way to do it. But anyway, I wanted to contribute some ideas for Nascent Kaleidoscope. I simply don't know if you're very active in the Fanfiction or on Webnovel. I mean, I don't know if you read all the comments you receive. So I'm afraid this message will get lost. I hope you'll read this. I hope you like my ideas. Or at least dismiss them. On the one hand, I'm delighted with your story. I initially started reading Ocean Song (which I enjoyed a lot), then someone mentioned Nascent Kaleidoscope and it piqued my curiosity. I'm thrilled I listened to my reading instincts. Because this is a wonderful story. Brother or sister, great job! You're fantastic. But anyway, getting back to the point. I have some ideas, a bit strange. It depends on whether you move in similar circles to mine. But I'll give it a shot. 1. Eragon or The Inheritance Cycle. It's a very, very interesting place. For someone like William. On one side are the Dragon Riders, with their immortal magic and the true language of the Elves. The Shadows and the fearsome Galbatorix. A man who technically brought down a pantheon with 13 people at his side. It's an interesting world to explore, perhaps basic in some aspects, but similar to Harry Potter at the same time. It's even more interesting with its mental magic and true names. The name of the ancient language that Galbatorix discovers could even be used against Solomon. And even the magical powers of the Dragons could help Ddraig recover physically. The Eldunari are very interesting. 2 Shadowhunters... One thing that annoys me about this world's fandom is that people focus too much on romance, which is why there aren't many good fanfics. But it's a very interesting world for Abrahamic powers. Damn, in that world there's something that would make William salivate: the cup of Raziel, the Lord of Thrones (the level below the Seraphim, an interesting addition to your story even without going to that world). That cup is literally a diamond in the rough for William. Essentially, a human becomes a Nephilim, a human who is part angel, part human. A demigod, so to speak, but of both angels and humans. And I know what you're thinking: "But shouldn't that be possible because of William's demonic side?" Not necessarily. The cup, and even the descendants, are still part human. And they can be modified independently of demonic blood. One example is Sebastian Morgenstern, one of the saga's most powerful villains. His father, Valentine Morgenstern, an absolute monster, grafted Lilith's demon blood onto him in his youth, just as he did with Claire (the protagonist), but in her case, he grafted angel blood. This made both children very strange and interesting. What I mean by this is that if William were to drink from the cup, he could actually transform part of his former humanity into angelic blood. He wouldn't transform all of it; I believe it was only 1/3 of his blood, so his mother's heritage would still exist. But it adds an interesting dimension to the story. Especially because I think it would make him immune to holy energy and give him the Nephilim runes. On the other hand, if you research this story or have already read it, it's funny to see the racist Nephilim cowering before a true Demon-Dragon, and possibly a Nephilim himself. He would even be considered one of their Warlocks (child of a Demon and a Human). Ironically, if you read this Shadowhunters Saga, you'll like it because it has some similarities to your story. There are even the Fae. It could even be interesting if Raziel is dead in DxD. Because of the great wars, if William appears with his blood, it could cause Mikael and Gabriel to be dismayed and astonished. After all, he would be the Leader of the Thrones, the angels below the Seraphim. And I suppose he was a great friend to them. He holds the title of Angel of Mysteries and Guardian of Secrets. An empty throne in DxD that our dear William could occupy. I like that

A great work; on the one hand, it's never boring. The protagonist doesn't just move; the world, or worlds, move with him. Basically, there are consequences in those worlds for his actions, and unlike other travelers, they aren't definitive. The protagonist will return, and for better or worse, this will affect his journey. There are very epic battles, even some little-known mythology. The protagonist's female companions aren't "second-hand"; they have relevance, their own battles, politics, or difficult stories, which the protagonist tries to help them with.

I thought it was a confirmation of where you were going, hahaha.

He said he likes redheads

I sincerely hope he ends up with Saskia, but I suspect Triss is the key. Although it's a little weird considering both of them have ended things with Geralt. Saskia seems healthier to me. Well... I don't know if a dragon and a human... you know, can copulate and have children. Half-elves exist, but I don't know about half-dragons, if their existence is even possible. But anyway, this is the author's decision. Good luck, my friend.

Hey man, is this alive? It was good, honestly, I miss it. Unless real life is tough.