Get rid of “with” in last sentence.

Then*

Classic Cliffhanger <3! Looking forwards to the next chapters.

There is seldomly writing errors. I’ve have yet to find a section that either didn’t make sense or was unreasonable. If you pay for privledge the most you find is the slight misspelled word but author is quick to fix. Follows a 2 per day schedule but sometime releases 1 then pays back with 3 chapters. Author doesn’t have to do that. Aswell author never leaves gaps in releases. Someone books go on hiatus when authors take a break. GuiltyThree recently planned out the release of chapter automatically while they were gone. Immense dedication. Characters in the story are great. They make actions and judgments that genuinely seemed reasonable. Aswell Sunny’s perception of them isn’t overly bias in the way he acts. It’s seems a very grounded point of view which leads to a more raw feeling to the work. <- some books feel like repetition of same plots and schemes, this one does not. Plot is crazy creative, tons of twists and turns. Just check the comments at the end of some releases . People some days are heavily complaining about cliffhangers as they can’t wait to find out what happens. I always thought that was awesome to see. The order of power and the structure of government and different systems is explained very well. It’s actually crazy to read along as people are making theories and stuff based on the description of the past. You can’t really do that if author is constantly changing and mixing reality. So in that sense author created a clear and concrete structure for power and position. Obviously this entire review is bias lol. Thank you guiltythree for an amazing work, can’t wait to see where it goes.

Masters*

Six master yet named 7?

“Without missing a beat”*? Never heard bits use.

worlds*

Doesn’t Mordret know his true name and the only reason he can’t use it is because he already has an owner?

Neither?

Project Thor.