STOLEN_king

When I first read the synopsis I was happy, as it is rare to find a book where the MC is not either dicking around with diff girls or being hella overpowered. But well it disappointed me, the first 4 chapters of yours they are very boring. I do know that you might have wanted to explain the world's background but you could've taken a diff approach. All I am trying to say even though your story might be amazing or the idea behind is amazing, the way you put it in the words was a little Disappointing.

Hey author i really like your story....but if one thing that i would nitpick about in the latest chapter would be jon arryn is not supposed to hire assassins, he is an honorable man, even ned stark who is famous for his honor, learnt it from jon arryn...well it really doesn't matter anyway it's your story it can be a little AU

man you should read the current chapter......even though it is not the best it has become much more interesting. and his second romance was executed perfectly

amen