well, I don't know about this novel maybe I will start a new novel with just cultivation focus only not fanfiction, Thanks for the review :) (maybe I will go back on, but I lost motivation because I didn't write great grammar and I felt bored and just deleted everything trying to make it perfect but lost motivation but soon will get back on it.)

working on that, just bored...

Working soon more serious on this novel waiting for me to have more time so I can focus on writing the novel so I can bring my ideas to the novel would be fantastic !!!:)

Hey, guys soon will be on writing again !!

Thanks for the comment i will check it out ,btw what u mean u use translation?, you can wright the problems And i will fix them after i login again.

Hm for sure soon be working on the next chapter and a new novel that will write now :)

Hmm, what do you mean, anime and cultivation are a bit different the cultivation on like novels like martial peak and the ancient goldy monarch, martial world, will be like domain he can go and dominate it and the anime the same like dxd and naruto and like that. and one-piece Well, I have many cultivation novels that I like and want to use but is fun what other people would like me to add something like!!

well indeed I am not used to writing in English lol is not my first language but sometimes I write with big capital because it looks better sorry will go again and check it !!!

Well sorry lol I just them now the mistakes lol I need to double-check them again lol I was interested in writing a new book now going to check the chapter now but will be ok for you to share my problems it will be easier for me to understand so I can wright better in the future that will be nice of you:)

hm, where is the problem will try to fix it is because they are too close?

Thanks will try on keeping in it up

Working on It thanks for liking the novel (:

Like and add if you like.

it was From the other Galaxy's and the Chaos Lotus he posses and just the Universe evolution that I was planning slowly but I just changed the whole story and went in different path check this chapter and leave a comment it will help but it was rushed from my excitement that i got writing but lol in my head it sounded a lot better but i wrote bad in the start ..... well i changed the story now but the essence will the same you can check it if want ..

Change the chapters and the whole thing soon the will be new chapters with new definition and better but there will not start from Naruto realms but from its own star i will be working and on my own grammar well right me the Anime/Novels that would like me to put in like DXD Naruto one piece martial peak and many more i know so you can add

If you could eplxain some more i could look in to It in And try to Fix it that would be very nice and for sure i have skIpped many naruto things beacuse well i didnt want put to much attencion there I will try to fix but i will see😊

Well in the start chapters i didn’t see the chapter i after i pota them and they were rushed like in 30 minutes i have some Problems I be looking at them and will epxlain the first chaptes better thanks for the review btw lol be re writing the the chapter soon lol but i am bored

yah sure lol taking a break to see my grammars and the wrongs but I got a bit bored now be checking that later ....

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Hey guys be taking a break and relax and try wright later be taking some days a break (: So would like to add some reviews and comment about my mistakes and focus on them thank you This a fanfic i know but i cannot change to fanfic ,it but there will be more than a fanfic there will and original content.....