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DaoistywHEoI2dCommentedbeard yew bet he looks like an uncle
"What in the name of Lucifer have you been eating? You are as tall as Avivoton now, but the beard is nice. You look like a proper Bael."- DaoistywHEoI21dPosted
better than raw , 🙊 ng from experience I have read 150 chapter RAW ,The Chinese MC is an insufferable egoistic @$$h0le,who thinks the world revolves around ,after reading this I found that the similarity between the RAW ended on the 3rd chapter , truthfully I was expecting to read a better grammar version of the original thankfully the author changed it and made it into a whole new story ,it's entertaining and fun yet fluffy at the same time ,keep it up❤️🔥👍👍💯
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well after reading this fic and comparing it to the mtl version all I can say is it feels realistic,funny right a fantasy type feels realistic but that's what I feel ,I have read mtl version upto 150 chapters and that Chinese MC is so obnoxious and feels like an entitled asshole and he feels he's some special Chad when he's just some worthless civilian without any redeeming qualities well enough with the hate ,let's talk about this fic it feels relaxing and fun to read and the author made minor characters like kushina ,kurenai ,mikoto etc more colour and their interactions are cute and lewd and fluffy
- DaoistywHEoI25dCommented
can u stop using armored it sounds wierd ,can u use master
"In that case, my Armored, I shall ensure that no one even remembers these pests by the time I finish them." - DaoistywHEoI26dReplied to Leixein
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[Hmm... Let's see...] Her new father observed her intently before he started speaking: [A name fitting for those beautiful ruby-like eyes... akin to a crimson hue of the burning sun... And since she's as beautiful as you... How about Roxanne?] - DaoistywHEoI26dCommented
which source is this
[Hmm... Let's see...] Her new father observed her intently before he started speaking: [A name fitting for those beautiful ruby-like eyes... akin to a crimson hue of the burning sun... And since she's as beautiful as you... How about Roxanne?] - DaoistywHEoI26dCommented
if u only cook then it's not that great
A man that can cook is quite a fatal attraction to women. - DaoistywHEoI26dCommented
author forgot to add super handsome
A man that can cook is quite a fatal attraction to women. - DaoistywHEoI27dReplied to Marcelinho_Ggazeli
xia qingyue did that due to being guided by heaven she is the scapegoat prepared by heaven to take his negative karma and she knows it that's why she made him hate her and his family is not dead and qingyue is the most pitiful character in atg she gives her whole existence to yun che
"World-Defying Heaven Manual, divine practitioners shall defy the world, mortal practitioners shall attain godhood…" Within the countless flowers, the woman with golden hair lightly whispered, "In this world where the gods have long since disappeared, it is time for the birth of a new divine being." - DaoistywHEoI28dCommented
burn🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Issei - But I don't. - DaoistywHEoI29dCommented
it's not a problem dude u made his pp 6.5 inch which is good for normal human and ciel or true dragons are anything but normal they won't feel pain and this is a fantasy world so magic duh and his pp is tiny for a true dragon
"Fufufufu~ Is my Ciel-chan has a fetish~ fufufu."Rimuru teased Ciel a little and returned to their makeout session.detailTensura: Primordial Silver to True Dragon - The Tale of Rimuru TempestAnime & Comics · God_RimuruTempest - DaoistywHEoI1mthCommented
I think he's just raising thre level of douluo universe , seriously a titled douluo could be killed by heavy caliper sniper bullet and he compared them to dxd beings in Satan class
'You'll be disappointed, Xiao Chen.' Huo Yuhao thought this because he believed Highschool DxD doesn't possess that many rare materials compared to Douluo Dalu. He gazed at everyone and explained a few more things about Highschool DxD's world since they would need to stay alert. - DaoistywHEoI1mthCommented
your world view needs to be changed don't always think about conspiracy theories
After all, some humans were capable of flying through space in rockets we built from scrap metal, taking pictures of other galaxies, and theorising things way beyond our comprehension, so how difficult would it be to cure an illness like cancer? - DaoistywHEoI1mthCommented
all the systems potential is wasted
Should I rewrite this novel? Because earlier chapters I used Open AI, around 20+ chapters needed to be rewritten and turned into normal dialogue. - DaoistywHEoI1mthCommented
rewrite dude has a many children system and he barely marries two women,if you don't like harem then why this system are you an idiot
Should I rewrite this novel? Because earlier chapters I used Open AI, around 20+ chapters needed to be rewritten and turned into normal dialogue. - DaoistywHEoI2mthCommented
another disgusting lolicon MC
" WHY IN HELL ARE YOU NAKED ". those where the first words I said after I had snapped out of my trance , ' No control yourself , Don't look , look away '. I tried to look away from the tempting figure infront of me which took up most of my will power , ' I am not a Loli-con , not a Loli-con , not a Loli-connnn '. I kept chanting the phrase in my head like a prayer but I was still loosing it , her naked body that lay flat on top of me was not helping at all.