Hero_DarkyDark

This review is based on the first three chapters but so far I am interested. It's a neat story idea to see a story about martial arts exception from the judges' point of view. It's an aspect of a story that's just waiting to be explored. My criticism is that the beginning seems to be a little slow at first as we don't get much about the main character in the first chapter except a few lines saying what he was. I'm excited to see where this story will go and if the quality would improve.

Well they seem like a fun bunch of people to be judges

Hey appreciate the criticism! I'm glad a lot of what I'm trying to get through to the reader is reaching! Yeah, updating consistently is going to be a bit hard in the coming weeks but hey I'll see how it goes. I'm trying to keep it to at least once a week. Hopefully I can continue to keep your interest!

*Fixed it was originally civilly discussed but I decided to change Civilly to civil but forgot how that affected the word discussed

thanks for finding this mistake, fixed it!