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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight16d
    Commented

    Not sure about the time period this is set in, would have been better in a wuxia period not recent history.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 Signs of a Doomed Nation
    Immortal Taoist: Cultivating in the Martial Arts World
    Eastern · Titanium Ship
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight124d
    Commented

    Its a wish fulfillment novel again, is the book ending it what?

    Ch 150 Human keep changing
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight125d
    Commented

    Great story progression now to rebuild, otherwise story would have ended with multiple uneventful time skips.

    Ch 105 Accepting the situation and Mindset
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight125d
    Commented

    Now things are getting interesting .

    Ch 102 Awakened
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight125d
    Commented

    What message are you trying to convey in this book. At the moment the ideas seem infantile . A book about a loser becoming worser than their bullies, adding wish fulfillment as well. Narcissistic , arrogant are not Mc characteristics .

    Ch 84 Auditorium
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight126d
    Replied to chaotic_1

    MC must be logical and smart , if he exposes his magic , he'd be closer to meeting a dragon . He would already have enough problems with he master swordsman talent.

    Ch 68 Dark flame
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight126d
    Commented

    ???????

    'I will look handsome no matter what I wear anyway.....sigh.... if this goes on, I will really become a full blown narcissist.....well there isn't anything wrong in being one.'
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight126d
    Commented

    MC busy hating on a kid smh.

    Ch 62 The witch
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight126d
    Commented

    mc just said he didn't need attention because a dragon might come after him but now because harem and being a showoff it doesn't matter. Stop making your Mc idiots because they are cautious .

    Ch 55 The red earring
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight126d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 31 In the end, he is still a loser
    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight127d
    Commented

    Dropped. Dude and his parents should have died a long time ago.

    Ch 40 The Arrogant King And The Path Of A Paragon
    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight127d
    Commented

    Author has been making hasty decisions the last couple of chapters, that's why we didn't get a proper training arc.

    Ch 37 Daneel's First Year At The Academy
    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight127d
    Commented

    Dumb novel and over confident MC. He's turning into the silk pants and he's still only a human level 0. Ridiculous.

    Ch 35 Axelor
    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight127d
    Commented

    One of the dumbest decisions I have read, right after someone is deemed a top talent , he wants to step on them. There has to be some type of heavy consequence for the stupidity.

    Ch 34 Heaven-Defying Talent
    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight127d
    Commented

    Comments here seem dumb, you can't inconvenience the status quo, without sufficient power. Would be an imbecile to show off.

    Ch 33 Elementary Particles
    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight11mth
    Commented

    please your translation is bad and I feel like words are missing , replace living legend with something else

    Ch 119 The Living Legends Assembly!!!
    Deity Hero: Me! Gaining Disciples Makes Me Stronger!
    Eastern · Master Laugh
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight11mth
    Commented

    need to tighten up the translation, it's paid chapters

    Ch 114 Reward!
    Deity Hero: Me! Gaining Disciples Makes Me Stronger!
    Eastern · Master Laugh
    detail
  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight11mth
    Commented

    we going to soul society

    Ch 38 Trolling Everyone And Get The Spear
    Strongest sect Master
    Eastern · sleepingpeacefully
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight11mth
    Commented

    The grammar issues are irksome.

    Ch 3 System Rewards
    Strongest sect Master
    Eastern · sleepingpeacefully
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  • Neo_knight1
    Neo_knight11mth
    Commented

    Mc I'd going to die or kidnapped when he levels up, is he dumb?

    Ch 44 044 You dare to make such a demand?
    My Life Can Be Infinitely Simulated
    Eastern · New Booth
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