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火影:我杀敌能掉落物品
Too much forced interaction Too many wrong names Bad translation Average story at best or you can say it’s not that good
Story is very good MC character development is very good Side character development is also pretty good
Bro raw name please Bro Chinese name plus
Writing style too irritating Every other word or sentence there is “interesting” MC doesn’t feel like he is in the same wavelength as rest of the world or story And everything in the story feels like they are waiting for MC Too much narcissistic MC
Bro original name please Chinese name please
Bro raw name please Bro Chinese name please Bro original name please
Bro raw name please?……………………………… Bro raw name please
Bro what’s the point of him being with them…….
Bro there should be other development other then what you’re writing