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no problem

Thank you for your honest and passionate critique. I respect readers who approach stories with a critical lens, especially when it concerns the portrayal of relationships and power dynamics. The story, at its core, is a character-driven satire on common tropes found in reincarnation, yuri, and harem fantasy genres. Yes, it plays with the archetype of the “obsessive soulmate,” but it does so with an undercurrent of self-awareness and absurdity. The protagonist, Cecilia, isn't being “brainwashed”—she actively resists, critiques, and frequently mocks the very system trying to bind her fate. That ongoing inner rebellion and self-awareness are the story's shield against falling into outright toxic romanticization. The “psychological horror” reading is a fair lens—one that adds depth. But for many readers, that tension between horror and comedy is intentional, adding layers to what could otherwise be a simple fantasy power-trip. This isn't a story about glorifying possessiveness—it's about subverting the romantic fantasy of it and watching a reluctant protagonist fight the tide of divine meddling and trope-heavy destiny. If the reader only sees the possessiveness and misses the protagonist’s internal war with her fate, they might be missing the core conflict of the book. That said, criticism like this is valuable—it challenges the story to remain thoughtful and not let satire blur into harmful messaging. But “personality death”? Cecilia’s sarcastic, grumbling, willful inner voice is still very much alive—and constantly resisting. While the divine system and soulmate bonds push a certain narrative, the heart of the story is about whether or not Cecilia will accept, fight, or change that narrative on her own terms. I welcome differing interpretations. I do hope readers take note of the protagonist's ongoing struggle, because her voice and resistance are what drive the story forward. And while you may ask why I’m doing this critique in a long paragraph—it’s because I actually like criticism and debate. It’s what helps us grow, not just as writers or readers, but as people. Thank you again for your perspective. It’s deeply appreciated.

I’d love to update more frequently, but with school, tests, and other events keeping me busy, it’s a bit tough right now. I’ll do my best to keep it up. Though thanks for your patience and for sticking with the story!

my man I'm already planning for something special, a Don special you just have to wait

Hmm, interesting ideas! Maybe after I get contracted by Webnovel, I’ll set up an account or a Discord server so you all can follow along. Stay tuned!

nah mate it's ok

Yes,they will be added

Kiyohime

Sorry, mate! With school hosting an exhibition, I’ve had no time to write. But don’t worry—I’ll try to update as soon as possible! Thanks for your patience!

Thanks for the review