I’m glad you enjoyed the story!

Thank you for the advice! I will try to apply it to my next book ;)

The writing is very descriptive it gives a creepy feeling, which is very fitting for this book! I like how the first chapter is very long because it gives a nice introduction to the story.

The story is nice, at the beginning the punctuation was kind of not that great as well as the grammar. What is nice is that the auth looks at the points he needs to work on and gradually improves. the author listens to the readers advice which is always nice. Keep working hard!

Great work!

Your welcome rather I should be thanking you for making such an awesome book!

Audrey! Please don’t cry! Author! Come here and let me give you a good beating! How dare you make her cry!?

This is a good book, the mc is really pitiful I really want to give her a hug! The ml is good and their interaction on the last chapter that’s not locked really breaks my heart. This book makes you feel emotional! The author is really good at making you go on a rollercoster of rides!

The plot was interesting and I love the characters. The mcs son is so sweet from what I can tell. He’s my favorite character so far! The read was great! Your doing great, keep going!

Your welcome

The plot was really intriguing it had me really wanting to read the book. And the book didn’ disappont me. Keep up the good work!

It really interesting and descriptive, it had me want to reading more.

It was easy to follow and engaging. The characters had a good sold design which is always nice. Keep up the good work!

It’s funny and engaging. The writing is easy to understand and easy to picture in your head. So far so good. Keep up the good work!

I will aso be deleting your review since it was just you stating that I have metal issues and not contructive crit.icism

I don’t see anyone else stating that I have metal issues and that I’m crazy. So you’re on your own if you seriously think I have mental issues. I’m not going to continue this conversation since it looks like you are young and can’t understand things as well as someone who is older.

Not normal dosnt mean they have mental issues. ALso there are a lot of people on here who write about torture so I don’t know why you’re over here telling me something that’s extremely disrespectful and rude.

Well for starters you have no way of knowing whether I have mental issues. Just because I write this type of stuff doesn’t mean I do it. also it’s rude and disrespectful to tell someone you don’t even know that they have mental issues. its just a story so I dont know how that determines that I have metal issues.

Well why would someone say the author has menstal issues if they are not being mean? You didn’t have to say it that way either. You could’ve just said you didn’t like it.

If you don’t like it then you didn’t have to read it. No need to be mean.