Jhanvi_Sha
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Jhanvi_Sha8mthPostedI can accept cliched story lines, but the characters are like cardboard cutouts. The ML probably has to see FL for once to fall in love with her obsessively, this is called lack of depth in character. And as the story goes in, more cardboard cutout characters come which further makes it dull. And for no apparent reason FL too fall in love with ML. Whatever. Anyways keep up the good work author.
- Jhanvi_Sha1yrCommented
he is like a Indian movie hero called Ajay Deva from golmaal
The man yelped when Damien twisted his fingers in the opposite direction which wasn't the way the fingers folded themselves. He pulled them far enough such that his voice echoed back by the small house while spilling out of the open door and windows. - Jhanvi_Sha2yrCommented
falcon?
"Will she be able to consume it, Falcon? It would be a pity if she won't be able to eat it in her current state. I will make sure you get something very fitting depending on her health if it gets better or worse," Damien smiled, his eyes crinkling that made the butler gulp. - Jhanvi_Sha2yrCommented
I really miss normal ML
"Why not?" he tilted his head, "I thought you the little mouse was upset for not having the mark on the skin. The slave establishment has a rule to not send the new slaves for auction, no matter what, they are disciplined, punished, and made to heed the very word of the guards so that they can be docile with their masters. Yet, here you are after a week out in the market ready to be sold. How did that happen?" asked Damien keeping his eyes on her keenly, "Were you exceptionally well behaved that the Warden recommended your name or did you recommend it yourself," he licked his lips to see her eyes widen and a wide smile came upon his lips. - Jhanvi_Sha2yrCommented
This guy..
Damien stopped in his tracks, gauging the girl with his eyes. The smile that had fallen down came up again making Penny worried, "You don't have the branded mark? No worries. Let's take a small trip to the slave establishment so that we can complete it." - Jhanvi_Sha2yrCommented
I hope that Damien kills him
"One more sound and I will make every one of you beg for your life," by the voice, Penny could tell that it was the same man who had pushed her into the carriage before, "Frank!" - Jhanvi_Sha2yrCommentedCh 2 Under the umbrella