Ok, so I found the start interesting as the atmosphere at first although peaceful quickly changed into apocalyptic I would say 😹, anyways the story was good but i would say that the phrasing can be improved.

Too less chapters🤤🤤🤤

The old man better start kneeling in front of him😂😂🤣

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Although only the first chap has been released, the grammar is awesome and the world building is well done. I hope the author conti the work.

Autho really does have a awesome way of wr the story. The descriptio are Top notc….

The novel is quite a nice one. Although the mysterious background , I believe the author should work on how the novel will be go out, I am waiting for more chapters

So basically I am telling thr basic summary of the story for reader to understand more about it: So basically this story is about a young and foolish boy whose first dream in life is to buy an autograph of miss universe 🤣. Our author here has played us! The character of this boy until now is so well developed…. Anyways, to the ones who think this novel is not worth it. I tell you that you are going to miss seeing him waste his pocket money on a autograph which was his first dream😂