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IMMORTAL_ZANE_2317dPostedLike one of the comments said, it's a diamond in the rough. The relationship between Mc and the girls was written very well. Even in the starting chapters, The fact that he told the girls that in his world they were just fiction also didn't cause any harm to the story rather it became better and formed a bond between them. The actual plot was also very well done. The English was unlike most WN wasn't poor at all. Thanks, author, for this wonderful work. I hope you create another masterpiece
- IMMORTAL_ZANE_231mthCommented"Beautiful..." I spoke aloud as i sat down in the office where Weir would usually stay in the show. I passed the weapon through my hands, the hilt had a decent grip to it as i passed my hands over it, that quickly changed as i got to the metal which felt more sleek, smooth and divine. A hand guard, that looked like an infinity symbol stretched, point downwards towards the floor and made it so that i could catch another lightsaber blade easily with it; The shape over my hand being akin to a an upside down 'U'.
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well said author san
"Shut the fuck up you filthy mongrel, in this universe I'm it's G.O.D so whatever I fucking say goes and you don't get a say, all you could do is grovel and beg and plead for more." - IMMORTAL_ZANE_232mthCommented
the lord of all - azath- TRUCK KUNNN!!!!!!!
"For the record, the most common one is done by a principal quintessence itself. The Truck. Effective and practical." - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
being kind to your enemies is only being a cruel to yourself. I didn't expect such cowardice
Chloe looked at Vahn with squinted eyes and said, "Cowards don't run into enemy territory on their own and save damsels in distress, Vahn. Do you think Milan and Tina would believe the words you're saying right now?" Hearing her words, Vahn felt a bit of hesitation and considered her words before trying to speak. - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
author san if you keep regularly updating this one I will also give atleast 1 or 2 power stones every other day. and I really like the other one too.
(A/n: Hey everyone! As I said, support me on my new novel. If you supported me there max, i will upload chaps here lol.) - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
thanks for the chapter
(A/n: It's been so long right? sigh… I am not dropping this. I saw many comments and some reviews so um I wrote even though I am quite busy with stuff and my other novel. I wrote the chap hastily so there might be some errors. Bear with it!) - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommentedCh 135 CH. 128: Spectacle
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yours truly recognized all of their origin in a single glance
All Rewards have been placed in Sora's [Inventory] to be retrieved at any moment.] (A/N: I got the Artificer knowledge from the Lightnovel 'Mythran's master of all'. Big Tiny Wishes, made by Yours Truly, 'motherfucking human king Lin Fan'. Violet Qi Cauldron Control Art from Lightnovel 'A Will Eternal'.) - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
get her
"Apparently, Sirzechs wanted to bring the attention to me because this is Rias' first birthday after their parents got divorced. And Venelana Bael who returned to her clan will be coming of course." Tiamat shrugged. - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
that kid is a pro
"NO!!!" Haruma quickly stopped his little sister and started to preach to his little sister. "We shouldn't get into their way, or they can't do what they can do. Got it?" - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthReplied to John_Rex_98
it means exalted Ruler of the people
"I am Aaron Toole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" - IMMORTAL_ZANE_233mthCommented
hahaha author you wrote shangchi ahead of time
In the movies, Mandarin was a fool used by Killian as a mascot but in the comics, Mandarin was much more than that. I don't know if Mandarin was real here or not. I haven't found any signs of him till now. Even though I and Dora were walking apart… we enjoyed our meals together. - IMMORTAL_ZANE_234mthReplied to IMMORTAL_ZANE_23
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author san, you portrayed this major part so beautifully😇
"It is Alright to be greedy right?" The young Jin-woo asked surprising Jin-woo. - IMMORTAL_ZANE_234mthPosted
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that's all the time A guy needs to get ready😅😂
After 5 minutes I was ready and said to Jin-ah.