Offhand i would suggest that you put this on fanfiction net for the story to get more attention (just a suggestion not a demand). For the review i like to say that it's always great that a greek mythology fanfic has hephaestus as it's main character but this story might be the best one so far considering it focuses on development and character interraction because to me hephaestus interactions with hera, hestia ,hades and athena along with his views on olympus is the biggest highlights in this story to me. Good luck in the future and i hope to see more of it (and pls don't abandon this)