CHEON_MA

What's Garp doing here?

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The spelling and grammar mistakes were extremely frustrating and made reading a real challenge. some basic proofreading would have made a huge difference. It’s hard to get immersed in a story when it’s filled with errors and awkward sentence structures. If you’re going to share your work with others, it’s best to give it some proper attention first. they need refinement. The story needs better planning and more careful editing. Perhaps if the T/N worked with an editor or a beta reader, the experience would be different. As it stands now? It was difficult to get through, and more frustrating than anything else.

Kukukkuku They are similar, though their ambitions are different, but no one can be Great Love

He looks like fang yuan

SUBARASHII!!!

Kukukkuku SASUGA!!! author-sama