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Mr_Game_and_Time

Mr_Game_and_Time

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2021-09-29 JoinedUnited States
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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time7 months ago
    Posted

    Loved the proses, The Main character, and the lore shown in the most recent chapters about what happened to his kingdom. I really want to read more after this.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time7 months ago
    Replied to FOURTH

    Fair enough, I think I got the habit of putting his pov into the narration. I might have to work on that.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time7 months ago
    Replied to FOURTH

    Middling furry traits, yeah

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time7 months ago
    Replied to FOURTH

    That is from his pov technically because that's his assumption on the afterlife stake she's eating.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time8 months ago
    Replied to facundo_rios

    Yeah, I'll work on that. There's a character who will appear and I'll say all the world building that I missed revealing when Reece learned it.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time8 months ago
    Posted

    It has an interesting idea but could use some polish in details on what's going on. The story feels like goes faster than it should but overall, decent quick read.

  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time8 months ago
    Replied to Angela_B_0678

    Thank you, this story was something I made to throw at webnovel but I ended up rather invested in it. I hope to upkeep what drew you in.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time8 months ago
    Replied to Zed2000

    Good catch, thanks for that.

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  • Mr_Game_and_Time
    Mr_Game_and_Time8 months ago
    Replied to Zed2000

    Yeah, I probably should've wrote "It's like reality suddenly struck the back of his skull."

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