Paras_Thakur_8083

Author please don't drop this book please continue,if you are unhappy with past chapters please only post 1 chap per day and keep on changing earlier chapters and post those together, and then just summarise these changes, this story has a lot of potential, so please don't drop this book

Oh it started so well, but just around chapter 60 it became almost unreadable. The weird affection chapters were so 🤢, something about the duo just feels so wrong like they are tarnishing the image of a master and student itself, and afterwards the way he spilled everything is just so foolish and childish,he is in a world where people have weird skills and he just exposes every secret to the lady and i mean EVERY ,he didn't even think for a sec that he could be betrayed as time changes everyone , or his future enemies could torture this information out of her which could be the reason she dies and drags him along with her, JUST PLAIN STUPID ,if he was in any good novel he wouldn't be the MC cause he would be dead after a few days and the characters are a little too simple, BUT' FIRST OF ALL TRY THIS NOVEL YOU MIGHT LIKE IT' and taking my own advice I will continue to read maybe i will be proven wrong and the story get more complex and multidimensional I will give a review again if things change

wow ,what an amazing novel just give it a read

It started cliche and i didn't care but the power ups without effort are just so off putting ,I have never read any manhwa ,manhua,manga and novel where the MC gets this much free stuff,it's just crazy with all the cheats he has ,I am sorry i couldn't get past chapter 10 it's just not for me

Amazing, just Amazing .The story is very well written and the MC has his OP moments,the only downside would be that it shares too many similarities to supremacy games but its a very enjoyable read and everyone should give it a read

This is a very good novel, i have also read Atticus Odyssey but in comparison i have to say that the character design besides the MC ,patriarch and a few characters are not so well written and the mc's friendship doesn't feel as deep and meaningful and the training arc was really boring as it was very easily predictable other than that this novel has one of the most thrilling and exciting fights and the arc endings are very satisfying. I loved the ending of the first arc I was so HYPED ,I hope everyone gives it a read as it is a very good novel

this story has the best plot i have ever read, the climax of every arc is just phenomenal and gives me goosebumps every time i think about it ,every character has their own personality and are not just there to make the mc more powerful

i have only read till 1137 chapter ,this story has its own pros and cons ,the pros being that the writing quality is good but the biggest turn off for me personally is that the MC is getting everything for free and it doesn't feel like he is working for it . It just doesn't feel rewarding in a sense the character development for some characters are very good like athena but could be improved on whereas the world building is very good just repetitive. The other part that i don't like is that the story is very predictable (i liked the part where the universal realm being invaded their universe and bided his time) of course many readers will enjoy this novel so do give it a read. Author keep up the good work👍

amazing story, do give it a read . Do not skip because of the starting chapters and mc's character because it has a reason stated later

its just boring and the writing quality is average but lacking ,after just 5 chapters i cannot read this anymore , the MC is just pathetic he is portrayed as suicidal,extremely dumb . I don't know how people rated this novel ,but it was unbearable BUT i didn't read more than 6 chapters so if you like these type of novels do give it a read , this is just my personal opinion