Noah tomorrow:

The story so far is well written. It’s too early to judge the world building, but the tidbits we get to see make it seem expansive. I also like the characters so far. Hope Luca sticks around, he’s the kind of dude I’d be friends with irl.

OPMC incoming?

👀

Oh shut up you horny schmuck, get on a different story if you wanna read porn.

Well this turned interesting

Been a while since a new chap. Is this work on hiatus?

We haven’t seen his status page for 200 chaps, and now it’s gone? :(

Now that Chrysa is severed from him does that mean he’s not gonna be gaining those space powers he planned on getting all this time?

Then you know what that means don't you?

That caught me so off guard

Is it just me or are these chapters getting shorter and shorter?

Super inconsistent

Exactly why I dropped this. Way too many inconsistencies. If you've read further, can you tell me if it gets better?

Also, quick question. I was under the impression that Aldrich would have space powers after the bonding with Chrysa. The Death Lord said so as much. So far he hasn't been able to access it. Assuming you've read further along, does this change?

I hope so. I feel bad for her.

This is brain damaging to read. Dropped.

What is the editor even doing? There’s no way they’re getting paid for this. The work is riddled with grammatical and writing errors.

This is some horrible writing

Ayo author… you good?