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DaoistBruceSmith1yrReplied to Anonny_AnonymousBecause range of motion is important to a fighter? Too much muscle limits certain movements. Limits that can be taken advantage of by your enemies. Besides, Mark isn't some stick-thin waif - he's muscled like a guy who does Gym Tiktok videos lmao.
Ch 1 Awakening (1)- DaoistBruceSmith1yrReplied to Darth_Evolution898
Yeah, but he still beats him half to death and leaves the solar system lol. Loving someone doesn't excuse you from any harm you've done to them...or will do to them in the future.
He gave a fatherly smile that I almost let myself believe in, his deep voice matched with his comforting tone almost had me tearing up as he said, "You could never disappoint me, Mark. Never." - DaoistBruceSmith1yrReplied to Mr_CuakCh 2 Awakening (2)
- DaoistBruceSmith1yrReplied to Khan00Ch 2 Awakening (2)
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- DaoistBruceSmith1yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 1 Awakening (1)
- DaoistBruceSmith2yrReplied to EvergreenGaming
There's no need for the MC to have such OP Sacred Gears. Besides, those Sacred Gears wouldn't really mesh well with what I have planned. I have something planned for the MC but it isn't any of those Sacred Gears, nor will the MC be getting two Sacred Gears.
Ch 1 Speedrun And First Meeting - DaoistBruceSmith2yrReplied to Dannyelle_Basse
See ya then. You didn't need to write this comment - kinda a waste of space when you think about it. No constructive criticism, no suggestions, nothing of real value other than your own assumptions. I don't expect to only get positive comments but when I do get a negative one, I want to know what I did wrong so I can improve. This comment has nothing of the sort.
Ch 1 Speedrun And First Meeting - DaoistBruceSmith2yrReplied to olympaforged
Anakin had over 20k, not 20k.
Anyway, the second thing? A Jedi - yeah, I was surprised too - appeared at the doors of the orphanage and pointed me out, saying I was Force Sensitive. He took out a Midi-Chlorian counter out and pricked my finger...and it turns out I've got a Midi-Chlorian count of around 21,000. Pretty decent honestly and when put together with my already rapidly developing physical prowess...and well, I don't need to be the Chosen One to kick some ass. - DaoistBruceSmith2yrReplied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
Anakin had way over 20k. Some say he had 30,000 and some change. Some say he had around 28,000. For this novel, I'm going with the latter.
Anyway, the second thing? A Jedi - yeah, I was surprised too - appeared at the doors of the orphanage and pointed me out, saying I was Force Sensitive. He took out a Midi-Chlorian counter out and pricked my finger...and it turns out I've got a Midi-Chlorian count of around 21,000. Pretty decent honestly and when put together with my already rapidly developing physical prowess...and well, I don't need to be the Chosen One to kick some ass.