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Adash_Dhakal_42791yrCommentedbros legit trying to be Kirito đ trench coat, fingerless gloves, long sowrd đ
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he obviously assumed by Khans attire
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oof why such edgy cringe? author is trying to hard with this đ I thought he wasn't going to be an edgelord?
"Looks like you don't get it. It's not me who's gonna pay. It's you who will pay for your sins." Kahn said as he readies himself for a brute clash. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrCommented
"wailed" is so funny đ¤Ł
The bandit who just lost his ability to reproduce wailed in agony and grabbed his crotch. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrCommentedCh 1 A weird day
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no need for insults brother. mc being rapist is quite extreme tho. it's not a light subject. also I kinda meant it as a joke like like "don't tell me mc is a rapist đ" anyways sorry for writing it wrong, have a good day.
The set of clothing, including the scarlet robe, originated from his sect and held not only its colors but its insignia. On his back was a black dire wolf of legend atop a mountain, with its claws lunging forth in a frightening pounce. Its eyes were beyond fierce and filled with killing intent. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrReplied to Leo_Wood_1410Ch 1 Yin of Oubure
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Yo! Thanks for commenting g. I'll take your words into consideration, as your my beloved reader. Keep commenting on what path Yin should take, and keep reading to see where he ends up! Also, don't forget that he will be the Conqueror of worlds (;
Ch 6 Prey Or Predator? - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrCommented
oh God, the cringe edgelord cancer
They simply called this type of coldness "murder math". Basically, it was a habit experienced fighters developed â no matter where they were and what mood they were in, there was always a sober part of their minds constantly calculating the most efficient way of killing the person in front of them, just in case such need arises. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrPosted
Chapter 1: Isaac has made his transmigration! Follow him on his journey to becoming the boundless demon! Remember readers, this main character is not your average old hero, and even though he many give you hints of these details, know that his character development will come, there will be a good amount of character development in this novel! Also, give me ideas of what you want to see in this novel, it can be anything, knowing it will help me write what you want to see, it is only a good thing! Thank you!
- Adash_Dhakal_42791yrReplied to Pranshu_Shukla_2836
I'm not understanding your question, yes, he is a 12 year old boy and yes, 12 year old boys can most definitely talk. If your wondering how he can talk after being in a coma for 12 years, its because the system transferred Yin's memories into the new body, including the ability to talk.
"Damn, that too long of a timer. Fine, Lets not get ahead of ourselves. I still do not know if this world truly holds magic like in the novels I read. Even if it doesn't, that doesn't change the outcome, but it is most definitely a large factor. It looks like this body has been in a coma for 12 entire years, I'll first see if I can at least walk." He thought to himself as he lifted the cover from his feet and slid out of the bed. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrReplied to Chris_Langlois
Alr well my message to you is: Live. and my reply to you is: alr bro but I'm just sayin this cuz my man is always depressed, I just want him to be more realistic innit
As for Krune, he was invited by supervisor Lu to go through the procedures to make an ID. After taking his name and a bunch of other information, his ID was made on the spot. He couldn't help but feel a bit depressed when he looked at his picture on the monitor. He couldn't use anything to cover his face or head during that time, so his rainbow hair was visible for all to see. - Adash_Dhakal_42791yrReplied to TheBearB13
Hey, author here. Thank you so much for leaving this review! It helped me understand a good bit of the general consensus of what people expect from my story. However, for now, at the very least, I am not planning to work on this story for a while. This may even be a permanent choice due to the fact that I am currently working on "Path to The Pinnacle." Thank you for enjoying this book, but I can assure you that Path to The Pinnacle is much better. It is a work of mine that is written by much more experienced hands. Although I am still a relatively new writer, from GOBLIN to Path to The Pinnacle, the amount of change in the writing experience is very large. Almost everything you like about GOBLIN including character development, world-building, and everything else is going to be heavily included in Path to The Pinnacle. I've written several books and I can surely say that Path to The Pinnacle is a culmination of them all. I highly recommend you check it out, and I'm sorry for the pause on GOBLIN. Thank you!
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Thank you so much for your review! Your feedback has helped me a lot in telling me what route I should go with this story. Even though the start is not exactly original, I have plans to make an original and unique story in the future as this novel continues. And as this novel grows, I will try my best to make it as flawless as possible. This novel will only get better, I can promise you that. Thank you!