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MC Character is cringe as f, wow the beginning is good, but how you as author decided to kill the prota of other story is not executed well, is to forced, its really too much, if in the beginning already this cringe i dunno how the hell in the upcoming chapter will become. But this novel is good for you newbie who aren't that used to this
When I read your novel it reminds me with USS novel, shameless MC with brain is good indeed
the reason i read this novel is because i want to read regressed villain trope, the writing itself is good but how Heroine suddenly like MC almost forced rather emotional or whatever. The way you tell us about heroines past doesnt make any sense to me, but if you ignore it, this novel rather good.
Good novel, i hope her mother have some repent for the reaction she has when her son got beaten. i dunno what should i review anymore, but this is really a good novel, you can try it
I hope your intelligent got boosted from now on
Almost from the prev chapter our MC Intelligence got nerfed, why thinking so much when you know what will you get if you sell it? Just consume it damn
There is another one that TL this novel with different title called Kaguya Forced To Play
i didnt like how MC play with other emotion, i already read most of your works, while the story itself good, the MC seems always on 3 stage of grief, doubt, denial, acceptance and back again and again. i didnt review most of your work but this, i really didnt like the current MC not when he seems couldn't careless with the first heroine. Good work and thanks for the creation