Venalter
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Venalter1hPostedGOOD LUCK AND WELCOME BACK BRO. for new reader this novel novel about otome and hidden dungeon, you can expect good fanfic in here, for you who search smut there will be a lot of them when MC realize or rather done for his family drama. i really like your story but since MC got his first, this story becoming a lot of smut, but i do hope there will be change in new volume
- Venalter3dCommented
got bored of his skill... is this translated novel?
"..." - Yu Tian stared at the system notification and anger rushed into his head again but he quickly got bored of his skills and calmed down. - Venalter11dPosted
This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)
- Venalter16dCommented
Fix
"Big Brother Xiao Ze, I've mastered Yan Strikes Back!" - Venalter16dPosted
Before I forget I'm gonna write a review here You better fix how to address cultivation level properly and about Techniques level too. I'm know you are using MTL, but please do proof read and fix some words if you do you will get more audience. The best MTL that I know in here is from Kiss Shot with novel called btth simulator
- Venalter16dCommented
Fix
Xiao Xun'er's personal guards were high-level Dou Emperors, and in the Gama Empire, no one could threaten her life. - Venalter29dPosted
Let me share my experience about this novel, the first few chapter you will be expecting MC cringe as hell, but after that improved well enough so you can endure it, if you really want to read this novel. There is no grammarly mistake in the translation and i amazed with the dedication of translator. I already read almost 150 chapters and there is little romance till here, didnt know about upcoming chapter and the so called NTR from other reviewer. I will give this novel translation 5 stars 1. Readable 2. I like HI3 3. Story is quite good 4. I like HI3 5. Expecting Harem ( feel that will be inc**t 6. I like HI3
- Venalter1mthReplied to HK007
- Venalter1mthCommented'We must stay focused brothers!' a voice echoed in his mind.detailBeyond Critical (Multi-Cross DxD, Rosario Vampire, Ikki Tousen, More)Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
- Venalter1mthCommented
if this the result of your editing
Chapter-1<*Source - I*> ( edited ) - Venalter1mthCommented
his change from mature to childish so fast as author make a MC ML
"That's not true!" I protested. "Everyone has different abilities and training methods. Just because I took longer to reach the 9th level doesn't mean I'm not a good soul master." - Venalter1mthReplied to RoughOnyon
- Venalter2mthCommented"You became desperate, using everything you had for a second attempt to take the stone. Even though you knew it was a trap, you still jumped into it. Tell me, Gai, is it really necessary to go this far just for her?"
- Venalter2mthCommented
Her sister behind her
[You are deeply impressed by Ichinose Honami's elegant and generous posture. At the same time, you also notice your sister behind her, who is about two years younger than her. She is very interested in your cat. She keeps staring at it and seems to want to touch it. the meaning of. ] - Venalter2mthCommentedHearing this Gamma was speechless, he heard that there was only one life in the game and he came up with a magic called 'Human bomb' he always thought that if he died, he would at least die in style, even in real life it was the same, he never thought that the magic he put on his avatar for fun would kill the last boss.
- Venalter2mthPosted
I gave 5 because i got what i search iykwim and there is a little review here What i search for novel is first if it readable or not, this novel fortunately readable, plot can go to last after all even if the plot is bad character development is trash its due experience, not every author can write good creation as their first. if you read this novel i know, you know, we know what we will read so WELCOME