Ishant_Tomar

nice way of showing financial problems

that kuru kuru gave a night note humor upbringing to atmosphere here so justified kuru kuru there😂

†* doesn't matter much just change Spelling of name

I'm pretty satisfied with the story buildup

Bro thinking like wannabe alpha males or those who think of themselves as giga chad

goalpost of opposing team

I really like the your artistic approach for system usage and I want to assure you that this work that you just start writing in boredom will carve your career in a positive sense

I think it's quite innovative idea of linking thunderstorm's thunder with lightning steps and that indra arrow celebration was lit thinking it's an idea that can only be seen in anime so hats off to scenario writing✍️✍️