That was really dumb, he could have made a lot more preparations that would have made it 10x easier

Purposeful too, it feels like something wrote with the helps of AI sometimes

« Deliberate » is really used too much, too many words for some simple actions, it can be annoying at some times

It’s really idiotic that he didn’t make anything to strengthen himself in a world like that before anything else. Like a venom suit or anything that is really on him at all time

I don’t think so, he probably become a kind of time anomaly, not affect by the past or future

Hope it’s not another novel that will never even have 10 chapters

well, you will lose a lot of readers with this decision...

Not an interesting world for a strong character

If you want the mc to go to the place of the main plot, could have been better if you made it her own choice, this kind of « coincidence » forced plot are just annoying and not really well thought.

Dumbledore didn't live 1/10 of his own life if i remember right, if he can even be as strong or stronger, he really is a waste... as he was a "genius" to begin with, not just a random normal guy

well yeah, that's a mistake i think, as it's a dream power, he can just dream them, no need to know how everything work, just need an IDEA, and it will just happen based on how he imagine them to be, it will definitely not be 100% like the real guy, but who care, basically the same for his training

Would have been more interesting with a female A.I, but well that’s just a personal preferences, great start!

Can’t find your patreon

It’s a gender bender, if you don’t like that, why read this type of novels

He doesn’t have any advantages beside his knowledge of the future? In a world of myth like that, knowing it doesn’t change tons as it’s hard to change without strength above others

Dominant in her own personality, not more than the mc I hope

Good to have a face at least if male look a lot different here from the movie

Hey, just remembered something, please don’t make it shy, «  flustered », »unable to refuse because of x » or some bs we see in most novels nowadays, written by mostly Chinese writers, that’s just disgusting, thanks for the chapter, have a great day ;)

Tftc

Would be nice to have images of the characters, if you want, with a.i, you can do it pretty easily nowadays