matheus_eric

Unfortunately, I don't know the name of the RAW. I tried searching, but I couldn't find it.

I get you, those Chinese novels sometimes are so confusing that not even turning your brain off helps

In the case of this type of Chinese novel, this is generally how it happens in these stories. In this case, Hinata likes Naruto because he defends her, and in the story, the MC defended her; the only difference is their age. Generally, Chinese novels alter the personalities of the characters.

Hey, could someone tell me if this series has NTR? I started reading it a few years ago and was really enjoying it, but I saw a comment back then that made me drop the story. Today, while looking for something to read, I opened it again out of curiosity and checked the comments, and it seems like there was a big argument about this topic. Just to clarify, I’m not talking about Freya. From what I remember, when the protagonist helped her get pregnant, they weren’t in a relationship yet. As far as I understood, it was more related to political reasons. What confused me was a comment saying that the protagonist told his women that if they wanted to go to other worlds and find another man, it would be fine as long as they didn’t cause any trouble. So now I’m wondering: does that really happen in the story, or is there actually no NTR in the series? It’s been a long time since I last read it, so I might be remembering things wrong. Sorry if I misunderstood something.

Overall the story is good, but the part where he suddenly lost control felt a bit random. The problem isn’t the MC being strong or the fast pacing, it’s more about the narrative angle. If the MC is already strong, it might be better to focus more on character interactions instead of forcing too many fights. In battles, you could add more power progression or aura farming, which fits this type of story better. Also, the MC having thoughts like “this one goes to Issei and this one goes to me” about the waifus felt a bit weird. DXD stories usually work better with harem + power progression. A model system (Dante, Vergil, Nero, etc.) could be interesting. And honestly, it might even be better to remove Issei, because he gains power too easily and it could make the MC, who trained his whole life, feel less special.

Mtl name?

Gostei desse livro, gosto da diversidade das habilidades e um sistema op que deixa op em vez de ficar enrolando, e mais tipo história de vida e relacionamentos e com momentos de Farma aura tipo dxd mesmo

Que bom! Tava achando que tinha dropado

Eu gostei da história, me divertiu e me fez querer continuar lendo. A única coisa que não me convenceu muito foi manter as deficiências do protagonista por tanto tempo. Pelo contexto da história, que tem mais foco no cotidiano e na interação entre os personagens do que em ação, isso acaba não combinando tanto. Outra coisa que me estranha é a quantidade de recursos para deixar o personagem forte, mas ao mesmo tempo várias limitações no que ele pode fazer ou aprender. Com tudo o que ele tem à disposição, parece meio forçado ele não acabar ficando OP. Uma alternativa que eu acharia interessante seria uma progressão por classes: ele domina uma (tipo invocador) e depois passa para outra. Assim ele não aprende tudo de uma vez, mas também não precisa esquecer habilidades ou ficar artificialmente limitado. É só uma preferência pessoal, mas no geral a história me prendeu bastante.

Eu conheço um em outro site, a tradução não tá muito diferente da desse autor não