i can reconfirm that the first chapter is word for word verbatim. I got the novel you mentioned in my library, its just a picture and nothing else. either the author removed it or the webnovel did. I wouldn't be surprised if someone's copy pasted this story and that's why it got removed in the first place. or the author made a new account and moved it over. possibilities possibilities.

this was funny as s***

this is genuinely funny. its like joining a game with catch up mechanics. once you finish a tutorial by make all the basic tools the game throws a full set of metal ones.

"did i forget to feed you?" no cuz, Nezu dose not forget, he 100% knew shoto was in the room

this was really good. hope it gets continued at some point.

Wish i read this sooner. I would of loved to bounce some ideas off you, of where to story could go from here. I'm a keep reading now.

messing with the diary was gold

I have hemophobia, a fear of blood. I will now replace blood and blood magic with tomato Sause and Tomatomancy with a profanity filter

it so good!

I like this Shoto better than the original. I imagine him with a ponytail. how about you?

anyone else thinking about the Mc of Fire force? this scene was nice.

treasure planet (A movie), Bobiverse (A book series), Borderlands (A game series) these are all fun and recommend watching reading and playing besides making a fanfic for.

is good

demon slayers pretty cool

this is the first rebels fanfic I've found and its great. I like the light saber bolt gun. fun idea. I like making new things from old thing. the shield that he has runs on a Khyber crystal. I would have him tweak it so instead of shield it could become a ring cutting enemies around him or less OP a momentary plumb of plasma. Keep it up your work is great.

so good. love 40k stuff so i cant help but compare. its like watch the creation of harlequins with a little space marine dawning colors according to their history.

i just got Warhammer vibes. Their like the sisters of battle.

this is the only fanfic of the boys ive found worth reading. please continue

I have thought about making fanfic with a time manipulating character for soo long. i get how he can use it to simulate other powers. freeze some air pockets and you got an invisible staircase or shields and barriers. super speed or teleportation based on outside perspective. or super punch using the differing speed & time between self and an object. or 1000 punches in a second. so fun and so broken. if a single person jumps in a room nothing much happen but if a few dozen do it'll collapse. just imagining the floor giving out and the mc just standing on air.

Your story is dope. can't wait to see more. but in seriousness take your time and don't burn out.