That VR pod is far too cheap, I have a $1500 laptop that doesn't even play new games at top graphics, but here $500 is enough for a VR pod? Honestly, if the basic one sold for $5000 and the premium one for $40,000 it would still be considered cheap and sold out.

What's the deal with the batmobile? Did he create it? How did he explain the name to his parents? Does he not plan to use the name batman in the future? It just doesn't make any sense.

Marines don't have colonels. His rank seems to jump about, can you make it more clear?

He should have started with laptops and smartphones, the arc reactor is very dangerous, which is why tony didn't release it. Jumping right into clean energy is also a bit fast.

Ugh telling some one you love them after just a few hours? Can he be more creepy and pathetic?

He was just an ordinary collage student? Yeah, 10 years ago. He spent 10 years traveling the world with basically unlimited wealth.... How is he so awkward with women?

What happened to the two magic books? Couldn't he copy the magic from them?

I have to agree with others, the mc is incredibly annoying, is he trying to convince everyone that he is mentally challenged? Also Evie and O'Connell hardly know each other at this point, constantly talking about them being a couple would be extremely awkward and rude.

Of the mc remains in a permanent state of confusion i won't be able to keep reading, "huh?" Does he have to seem so dimwitted?

Why does the mc seem more stupid the last few chapters? Like things are happening and he is always the last to catch on? Also he should have stayed on sky islands to train his crew for a few months. He is only 12, he doesn't need to rush.

He should have ate the fruit himself, or kunia should have ate it. Giving one of the most powerful fruit in the world to a guy you have know less than a month and kinda forced to join the crew is just stupid.

Would be good if he dealt with the rick and morty world and girls first before going to other worlds. He hasn't even dealt with the girls at home and at school yet, never mind the girls he meets on his adventures and he is already world jumping? Plus I've never seen the interest in the omnitrix, such a boring power.

Birka should have a proper way to train observation haki since it was very common in sky islands.

Honestly should just stick with the bounty Hunter gig for a while till you have a ship and crew, that way you can gather money and not be chased by the marines.

Leaving after the mission or during the mission would have been smarter. It also would have let him gather stuff for his escape instead of this half assed plan.

Why is no one shooting at jack? Most mafia and pirates carry guns.

Also why is he shouting out his moves when they are just punches? It's not like he has a devil fruit where he has had to develop moves.

Why is he so weak? He has had the bead since he was 12 and he is now in his 20s but he is far weaker that luffy, sanji or zoro at the start of the story.

Honestly, having a short man complex in one piece is going to get very old very fast. Plus being tall isn't that great, most buildings are normal sized.

He could have tried letting the system take their eyes bypassing the caged bird seal, if he closed their eyes at the time, no one would notice them gone before destroying their bodys. Also did any of them ninja have bountys? Seems a waste to throw destroy them without knowing.