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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Posted

    ff's premise is interesting, but I don't think I managed to captivate readers as the author expressed the narrative of the story. ----------------------

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    Naruto and Sasuke in DXD
    Anime & Comics · God_Child
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    the story is too confusing for me, i can't connect to it, just advice that most people who read ff keep reading a story when i can understand which course the world in question is following mainly yours and it's hard to follow since '2 protagonist' I don't have anything against it, it just seemed like I don't have a chronology, each chapter seems incongruous with each other

    Ch 13 Chapter - 13
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    Naruto and Sasuke in DXD
    Anime & Comics · God_Child
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to KyuuSushi

    This is a description of how I felt reading the end of the chapter.

    Ch 7 English Puritan Church
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    Multiverse Occultist
    Book&Literature · Loreheim
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to FlammableFire

    I was thinking about it

    Ning Rongrong, this girl, is too slow on her own. She can't walk a few steps and will complain like yesterday, so Ye Zhiqiu simply hugged her and left. And it feels good to hold Ning Rongrong. She is very soft and comfortable to hold. She still has a faint fragrance on her body, which smells good.
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    Walk around Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System
    Anime & Comics · Madara_Uchiha_68
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    what nonsense is this?

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    why attack the chest you know it's in the head that kills

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    bs

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    he is as strong as a low class satan?

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    Sigh

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    why does he do it for himself? 4 years and nothing

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    Is it just me who doesn't like azazel? the guy is very nosy

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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented
    This chapter has been deleted.
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    汉字/漢字gd
    Anime & Comics · Krishnbarad
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Posted

    I read up to chapter 23, I don't know if it's personal preference, but mc didn't captivate me ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    Ordeal of the Hopebringer: A Harry Potter Fanfiction
    Book&Literature · mark_kiple
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    he responds for the music but for a flagrant manipulation, no

    "Music your ass, that's the call of death." Ed mumbled annoyedly.
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    Ordeal of the Hopebringer: A Harry Potter Fanfiction
    Book&Literature · mark_kiple
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to Lotus79

    it's just the dress as a reference

    (A/N dress here ← )
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    Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)
    Anime & Comics · Hyberions
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Posted

    and a good ff despite the mc having a hero complex ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    New Hero in DxD
    Anime & Comics · kingCH
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Commented

    but what a looser guy

    "Hmmm… Well, fine." Haruno said and let go of my arm. "But just because I can't be physical with you doesn't mean that you'll get rid of me that easily, Haru." Haruno winked at me and took a few steps forwards. "Right, let's go, then! Or were you planning on spending that two hours standing here and boiling under the sun, Yukino-chan?" Yukinoshita stood still for a few seconds, then walked past the two of us back towards the signboard we had looked at when we first arrived here.
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    New life of the Kasugano Twins
    Anime & Comics · Riku_Wing
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to Abordoaj

    even the part where I read the mc only

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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to Auren02

    yes this is getting annoying

    Ch 47 Chapter 46 Style (3)
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    Peerless Twin Spears Of Douluo Dalu
    Anime & Comics · ArchDevilThearch
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  • Laycans
    Laycans2yr
    Replied to Laycans

    is the protagonist and an idiot

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    Complicated Sex Life Of Ben
    Celebrities · Fireces
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