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Nice, That’s what I’m talking about 👍🏻.
Thanks for the mass release!!!
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What… why though? I hope the exact opposite.
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The straight answer to your survey is that I thought it was pretty darn good. It would have been nice to see more time being devoted to his three women, especially Rachel, but I understand that maybe time constraints wouldn’t allow that. Also, not a big fan of the MC running off and adventuring without his family too much, unless it makes total since for the story. I prefer growth together as part of the story rather than girls being treated like trophies to be left behind as he moves forward. (You haven’t really done this yet) Enough criticism though. Your doing a great job!!! PS: Thanks for the chapters!
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Talk about not getting a break, the dude literally just got back from back to back missions…
Didn’t the “game” just start like less than a day ago and already a whole province is about to wiped out?