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Unnecessary content: ‘the strays were beastmen abandoned…….. took out their anger on other females.’ Repeatet too many times already! We Got the picture… use the wrightingspace for some actual content, that way you will have me hooked till the wery end. Pick up the pace a little… Eighter in the plot, or the wrighting speed. (Perhaps 2 - 3 chapters a week) Give us some Chardonnay in stead of applejuice please.[img=recommend]