Abbie_OmO
hello I am Abbie, nice to meet y'all I am a guy from middle east who likes alot of stuff!
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Abbie_OmO1yrPostedWell even though I am the creator and this novel is new imma review it: It kinda lacks and intriguing protagonist, this is chapter one though, next chapter we will be introduced to the story of our protagonist, the world building is I guess nice , it needs some editing though, but I guess it ain't bad so yeah, bet the story is for the normal person is uninteresting at first and maybe it is yeah
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in an alternative universe: [what uniform?] "SUDANESE MILITARY CLOTHES" abdoalbagy said
[What uniform?] - Abbie_OmO2yrCommentedCh 34 Mission Complete
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Deutschland! mein friend, it's far away country where German people live
Del decided to lie, "A country located very far away from here," Del answered. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
well played but...I HATE HOW ITS TOO FUNNY BUT TOO BAD XD
"Damn, Cole, you're such a player," Del said. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
HE GOT BOTH SISTERS XD , WHAT IN THE NAME OF *BEEP* XDDDDDDDDD
"Lynia," Cole said. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
what is he going to use magical energy on? using it to do kinetic energy on a high level on a iron thingy to simulate guns? other magic...? like explosions? I am kinda energetic for finding about what is magic used for!
Magical Energy: 960/960 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
his language comprehension is a useful skill tbh , even tho it have no levels or something, it seems to be a rare skill a bit, his marksmanship skill is kinda equal of a soldier who is 6 months in training in Sudan for me, I guess Sudan have a good military in my view so I guess if he was 30 lvl in marksmanship , he would be skilled as a soldier who trained for 1.5 years in Sudan + ( did a solo training on his own) , well , I guess in lvl 70 he would be strong as a military general,
Skills: Language Comprehension | Marksmanship LVL.14 | Firearms Comprehension LVL.12 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
his sister who is a woman sister of him probably have like 700 attitude by now, I think his sister is stronger and better than del himself, I just don't know if he is going to re-join his sister or brother
Aptitude: 12 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
this is basically del , a horrible guy who likes money , yet is kinda a bit heroic a bit , he isn't a nice person or an annoying person, and his character is kinda cool and kept me keep reading
"Whatever, I'm just here to do a job. Whatever you think about me or Cole isn't relevant to our performance, now is there anything else that you want to add?" Del asked. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
her sister is probably confused on why she is looking into his big iron thing
Lizbeth was just looking at Del's MG-42 which looked unfamiliar in her eyes. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
why not buy a minigun , more killfull and effective tho it is bullet wasteful, like it may kill like 40-50 people but it will take all yo bullets eh?
Del wanted to buy automatic weaponry such as an MG42 to his arsenal if he completed the long-range quest. He might also need to teach Cole how to use guns so he could work more effectively in protecting him from the danger of another world. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
well , Rina fears that we die , XD
"Yeah. Rina kept going back and forth to this building because she is worried for you. Del, you should tell her before you for a very long time," the receptionist said. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
his skills is cool , it's like if I had a gun , except I am 191 cm tall (6'4) , well maybe a bit younger and more interested in engineering in general
Skills: Language Comprehension | Marksmanship LVL.4 | Firearms Comprehension LVL.3 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
does he even use magic? well besides his gun , I guess it doesn't matter
Magical Energy: 336/336 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
WOAH HIS HEALTH—
Health Point: 1035/2450 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
his viability went up a bit
Vitality: 35 - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
well , Dayum ,
"Fair enough. Don't worry, I understand what you meant. I will help Cole with his research," Del said. - Abbie_OmO2yrCommented
would she? ....nah it's just a nice old lady who wants to adventure
If Del took the offer, he would have the opportunity to do a harder quest and gain more money in the process. However, there was also the risk of being stabbed in the back with this woman. After all, he couldn't trust anybody in this world. Still, the woman wouldn't steal anything, would she?