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"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"
"Dear author, could you consider relocating the A/N to the end of the chapter and perhaps adding a symbol to signify which paragraph it corresponds to? While I adore the story, these side notes tend to disrupt the flow for me. Nonetheless, I'm committed to continuing reading. Yours is one of the few fanfics I've come across that truly captivates me. Keep up the excellent work!"
It is a disease that causes scarring (fibrosis) of the lungs. The word "idiopathic" means it has no known cause. Scarring causes stiffness in the lungs and makes it difficult to breathe. Lung damage from IPF is irreversible and progressive, meaning it gets worse over time.
I feel like using the term stabbed or punctured or even poked would be better. Just my opinion.
Catch
Correction kagune
Ahh I like the twist with the jaguar from Tokyo ghoul.
Finnaly a author who understands.
I like this concept
Looks like I found nice fanfic to add to my top reading list.
Another great chapter. That was unexpected but in a good way thanks author San.
Another good chapter!
Another great chapter keep it up author San.
Great start! Let’s see what in store for this fanfic. First fanfic or Naruto where their is triplets. Seems a bit of fresh air.
So bee is a male after all. Pheww close one.
*prompting