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    FourPin12d
    Replied to RedCheetah07

    It's a joke

    "Come in, both of you." She welcomed them in, as did Grant with a smile that took real effort. "Grant can't talk, but unfortunately it's not going to be permanent."
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    FourPin14d
    Replied to RedCheetah07

    Yeah that'd do it, but not where I wanted to take it Thanks for reading and commenting

    "There must be some way." Rosie begged for an idea, a solution from the old world genius. He looked at her without hope.
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to RedCheetah07

    Ha! Thanks for reading and commenting

    Her time with Matt was spent briefly walking through the woods, placing glass bottles. Then returning to the rooftop and shooting them with the sniper rifle. Rosie enjoyed it, the focus required and the quick maths brought a calm with them. Matt would spot through binoculars, instruct her on windage and range. Another system activated, adding a rangefinder function to the directional light built into the pipboy housing.
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to RedCheetah07

    Not everyone he meets is a raider

    "Yeah, he vanished? How much Psycho did you hit?" Asked the taller man. John could see the bruising up his arms as he turned. His skin scarred and dirty, open sores across his neck.
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to Sergio_Garcia6188

    Thanks. I always think that villains that sort of have a point are more engaging.

    Ch 181 Vol. III Chapter 51 Jones
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to Sergio_Garcia6188

    Thanks for reading and commenting

    Ch 178 Vol. III Chapter 48 The Tenth Man (Part 2 of 2)
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to Sergio_Garcia6188

    Yes, yes she is. Thanks for reading and commenting

    "I always leak ocular coolant at weddings." Janey piped up. "That was a joke, my ocular coolant systems are functioning effectively."
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to Project_Traveler

    Yes.

    "Yeah, he vanished? How much Psycho did you hit?" Asked the taller man. John could see the bruising up his arms as he turned. His skin scarred and dirty, open sores across his neck.
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to Apfelkuchen18

    Thanks, I wanted it to feel tank like

    Ch 35 “Say thank you old dead guy that invented auto-stand.” (2/2)
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    FourPin1mth
    Replied to AskAssassin

    It's written in that style, it's not copied

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    FourPin2mth
    Replied to Kid_Wicked

    Thanks for reading and leaving a review! I went back and forth on the Vol 1 ending, I'm glad it had the desired effect. I think the end of vol 2 is better than 1, enjoy!

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    FourPin2mth
    Replied to Zerodusk

    'rock breaker' was a slang term for his old job Thanks for reading and commenting

    Ch 36 "Never given or taken lightly."
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    FourPin2mth
    Replied to Zerodusk

    It's a common saying it doesn't need to be accurate

    There are no straight lines in nature, his time in the caves taught him that. John pressed on down the slope, eager to see the new, old world up close
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    FourPin2mth
    Replied to Dms_Hd

    Thanks for reading and commenting

    "Smooth ain't it." Robco with a grin. "That's whiskey, I make it myself." He poured John another, "Mix it with that cola." John did, finding once sharp edges rounded with surgery sweetness. Burning replaced with warmth in the chest and lightness in the limbs.
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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to Lionel_Johnson1

    No synths, too specific

    "I'm sorry, I don't know, this is really weird." John looked at Robco. His skin, his eyes were a sickly green, his teeth brilliant white. He looked down at his shiny blue suit. The advanced fabric still impossibly clean. Yet traces of smeared blood showed on his hands in the new light. Robco noticed the suit as well. And something else, something in John's eyes reflecting light. Quickly he turned them off, offering kind words.
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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to Gunkman

    Not sure what that means, but it has nothing to do with 76, that being decades and far away Thanks for reading and commenting

    Instead he sat a while longer, getting used to the fallen night and the grey black interlopers that shifted across the once endless blue.
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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to GABRIEL_Fernandes

    thanks

    Ch 141 Vol. III Chapter 16 “Not much personality.”
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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to Dade_Mihalic

    I used to work in a warehouse, we a split box of them we couldn't ship so it went to staff room. I ended up living off them the last week of every month.. They are vile. In researching the us version, I found a youtube series where in different nationality troops swap rations. The S. Korean actually looks pretty good

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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to ErozothDraeor

    I'm going to chose to take this in a positive light. I think what we have here misunderstanding. I wrote and an entire volume, posted that, with a clear and obvious ending. I did not and would not simply stop at an arbitrary point and "take a break." This is not a never ending serial, it is a trilogy as stated on the cover. I have written that and now I'm posting it I did write a previously on, but given the opening is a flash (very far) back I opted to dive straight in. The book has been written with returning and new readers in mind. I would encourage you read on, and if there's anything you're unsure of, ask. If there's anything you find lacking, I'd look at making additions. I, having a complete view, think that recaps are not needed, but I'm happy to discuss that with you or anyone else, once the story progresses Thank you for reading and commenting, I look forward to more forthright feedback

    Ch 123 Vol. III Chapter 1 “The day today is March fourteenth, twenty seventy. This is GNR.”
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    FourPin3mth
    Replied to Cartouk

    Four, actually

    "Single action." Rosie tried to gauge John's reaction to the uncommon firearm, wondering what he saw. She took his gear from the corpse, admiring the custom pistol before seeing the multi-tool and handing it back. She gathered the assault rifles, giving a pair to John, and keeping one. She didn't know what kind of weaponry would be at John's home, but doubted they had anything comparable to a Dominantor class Assaultron.
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