Thanks for the comment. Could you further elaborate about the part of showing ? If possible with an example . About the scenery I will try to describe with more details , at first I tried but it made too much text so I gave up about that . If possible I ask all the readers to help me correct the grammar , error ... to know where I could change for the better .

That was just a random name that I used . When I was writing this part , I still didn't what to call the protagonist so I used John

is it possible to read in Chinese version ? and if possible where