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Codog4mthCommentedhow do they have the term cannon fodder if they were invented THAT day?
Dean shrugged, "That lackey didn't know. You served in the military, so you should understand. The higher-ups often don't want the lower ranks to know too much. Knowledge of a powerful adversary could lead to desertion. They're just informed at the last minute and pushed to the front as cannon fodder. He learned about the loss of over four hundred men through a familiar face close to a leader."- Codog9mthCommentedCh 88 Hokage, Mission and Price
- Codog10mthCommentedCh 10 Chapter 9
- Codog10mthCommented
this was a pretty unrealistic chapter. nothing really wrong with that. it's just jarring after the realism of the rest of the novel. thanks for the chapter. Keep up the good work. also, I don't think a business mogul's plan to save the royals would just be show up with a sword.
Ch 48 Insurrection and the Lady in Red - Codog11mthCommentedCh 12 Author's Note
- Codog1yrCommented
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Ser William, gravely injured, had fallen asleep after taking milk of the poppy, leaving the sword with Viserys. - Codog1yrReplied to LuigifromFBI
did...did you not read the chapter?
Both women fell to their knees, then quickly rose up prepared for battle. Bekka and Orion had long escaped by using a Boomtube, the two New Gods having survived this day. Hela cared not of it, she was more focused on Grail. The Apokoliptian had just proven that she was far more dangerous, and had wounded Hela's pride in her abilities. Just as it seemed that Hela and Grail were about to fight, a neigh was heard. It was one that Hela knew all too well. - Codog1yrCommented
Three sentences
"I'm not in a relationship and it's not like I'm hurting anyone. I can do whatever I want. What does that have to do with you?" - Codog1yrPosted
I'm currently at ch 8 so very minor spoilers for chapters before up that. First of all every single chapter is of good length and value. There isn't that irritation that comes with 2000 chapters and each chapter having 1 important sentence. Not only are the chapters awesomely long they are all important to furthering plot and character growth. The grammar is very good, and I haven't noticed any major flaws. So far the story has stayed fairly loyal to Red Hood canonically, but there are more and more differences starting to show up. The MC isn't some flat character that only cares about strength or women. This story definitely places characters first and their power type and stuff second. So I guess if you like hearing about constant power ups this one ain't for you. The other characters so far have been interesting and 3-dimensional with their own motives and wants. My only "gripe" is the update stability. It is an understatement to say it is updated not often with the story being in my library for a month now I think. Author may not update it frequently but the novel is liquid gold, and I cannot recommend it enough.
- Codog1yrCommented
lily, violet, and Alex? on of these things is not like the other
"Mom, Dad, Lily, Violet." Alex choked out the names of his family members before breaking into all-out sobs at the idea of never getting to see them again. Never being able to go camping with his dad or taste the incredible homemade meals his mother makes that beat any restaurant. Never being able to kick back and drink with his older sister as they both complain about all the bullshit they have had to deal with during the week. Worst of them all, was the thought of not being able to see his little sister accomplish her dream of winning a best actors award. - Codog1yrCommentedWhat Ashton failed to notice was that, after he was off checking the durability of books, Aria left a 'comfort room break' on the station's desk. She only returned after ten minutes.
- Codog1yrReplied to MF_DOOM
why puerto rico?
Saving A Fox Pup. - Codog1yrCommented
ma'am -(the grammar police)
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Professional "skill stabber" here lol
[The skills stab is a place where you will find the skills that you learn first and foremost. Every skill will have 5 levels of understanding, entry, small success, medium success, large success, and perfection. To learn a skill you can use one skill point or you can use your own capabilities to learn it. From there it will take 2 skill points to upgrade understanding to small success, 3 for medium success, so on and so forth. There are many ways to gain skill points that I wont go into, a simple explanation is that you can get them as rewards for certain things but also every time your cultivation realm increases you will get a certain number of skill points based on your intelligence, and that is all for the skills tab.] - Codog1yrCommented
Annoying comment alert: It's centuries.
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loose is the wrong word here. " The noose is too loose," would be the correct use of loose. "the fish is going to lose the race," Sorry for coming across as annoying if I did but its a common mistake. sincerely- the grammar cops
''The first was stillborn. She could have died, that day. And this same risk is going to happen again. I don't want to loose her like we lost mother. Loosing her would be too much.''