It's not that he allowed them to escape. He was also fatigued and wounded from the battle, not to mention that lately, the wounds in his soul had begun to weaken him once more. Rest assured, I won't diminish his character or imbue him with compassion, as it doesn't align with his persona. His character remains malevolent, dominant, and formidable, and it shall remain so. By the way, I extend my heartfelt gratitude for your involvement in my novel. Your guidance and advice are genuinely valued.

I'm considering a longer-lasting role for her character rather than a mere one-chapter appearance.

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Indeed, I've read my fair share of novels featuring villainous protagonists, and I understand how excessive political maneuvering can bog down a narrative. My intention is to steer clear of unnecessary political complexities and focus on portraying a empire in all its dark glory. The idea of utilizing a first-person narrative is intriguing, and I plan to give it a try.

Absolutely. In the chapter where he assumed control over Veron, it's clarified that they are presently situated on a substantial island. In addition to the Empire, there exist three kingdoms and a mage covenant. As for the other continents, those details will be explained soon.

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I'll certainly give it some thought. This is only my second attempt at writing a novel, and I admit, I have little experience with romance or intimate scenes. However, the notion of the protagonist leaving a child in the lower realm, potentially for future plot development, does sound intriguing. It could add a profound dimension to the character.But, it's a concept that warrants careful consideration.

That's a truly intriguing idea, and I've been pondering it myself. Son of Luck or perhaps a Traverser. It does seem like something that would come into play in later chapters, when the world is truly in chaos and in need of a hero.

I appreciate your enthusiastic engagement with this story. To be honest, I didn't quite expect such a positive reaction. If you have any exciting ideas for how the plot could develop, I'd love to hear your thoughts. Your input means a lot to me.

Thanks !

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Ay, thanks for feedback. It's my first novel and im complete newbie, but i will try to improve it

Hi, why is that ?