HappyScotsman

Yeah but the people who are after him, do know. So the blindfold is pointless yeah?

Ikr, especially the kid who just got out of hospital, has amnesia and his parents are rich.

It was ok. Not completely shitty, not particularly good either. Some developments were pretty stupid and the grammar is kind of shitty, though.

MC getting the Rhode treatment

I’m starting to see why this story has so many views and fuck all power stones lol what a shit development. I hope your other stories aren’t this shit.

Just about sums up how I feel about this story in its entirety at this point lol

“Hey look! That guy is covering his eyes! I guess he’s totally normal, not like there’s a clan with very distinctive eyes, the last surviving member of which we currently want dead who would have a reason to hide their eyes. This guy is totally not him.”

The fuck did you do, skip the entire story?

This is like the third reminder that he is 17 mentally in the same chapter, do you think your readers are retarded? Cuz you’re probably right…

Some people make a big deal out of periods for some reason