Smash_Channel

amazing book keep up the good work

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seem like it woukd be interesting book add to my list of books to read awhile back and just came across it again but looking at the book seem ir hasn't been updated in long time which is sad considering based on your little you put for book for people to know what the book all about make the book seem interesting

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im going to give 5 stars gor now as the book had been great read so interesting concept and everything probably good use little work on something but overall a great book so far from i can tell the author seem new even so this is still a great start as I read plenty of book from new authors who completely failed at even making the book interesting within twenty chapter much less having me want to keep reading it within five chapter like this one did

great book so far keep up thr good work

honestly the story is great but tomorrow constantly jump from thing in one chapter to something entirely different in the next throws the flow of the story off while also leaving wondering like what happened after the end of the chapters because it just completed skip over it and move on to something else entirely like for example the chapter where the fight the snake in the tunnel the chapter end with them still doing so then the very next chapter is entirely something else

can see the steam rising from her head

I this the end of the book