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Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Ragewaarur the only one who corrected it the right way haha
He swung into narrow allies, climbed on the walls, and reached his destination in a couple of seconds taking the shortcuts he knew.- Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to josh_peds
pfft
He swung into narrow allies, climbed on the walls, and reached his destination in a couple of seconds taking the shortcuts he knew. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Megasus
XD
He swung into narrow allies, climbed on the walls, and reached his destination in a couple of seconds taking the shortcuts he knew. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
not even an exclamation point.. hes YELLING!
How could Department Director Hong not understand the meaning behind his gaze? He started yelling, "Old Zheng, Old Cao, you two are in cahoots with each other, and you're even scheming against me. I knew that nothing good would happen the moment you guys invited me over." - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to HuskyGorila
I would say yes, they do have a mental illness, and that culture has merely made indecisions like that normal.
Although William liked to be narcissistic with his looks, he still had a realistic approach when it came to relationships. Like all healthy young men, he was very interested in the opposite gender. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
extra cliche
soon everyone shouted - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Diabolic_eternal1
Republics*
Fortunately, Wang Teng didn't hear them. If he did, he might have peed in his pants out of shock. The young miss of the Tang family was at least a hundred kilograms! - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to profdiem
his tastes dont fit chubby ppl
Fortunately, Wang Teng didn't hear them. If he did, he might have peed in his pants out of shock. The young miss of the Tang family was at least a hundred kilograms! - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to ifuknow_u_know
well done is torture to eat compared to medium rare
���I'll take fillet steak, 2 centimeters (0,8 inch) high, medium-rare. Also, a vegetable cream soup, a side of roasted spiced potatoes. Red wine or beer are equally fine as a drink." - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Operon101
Actually his grammar has been perfect until now for the most part, unless it was recently edited, you have no standpoint.
"I look forward to seeing you back here in a couple of months, to start your specialization years. Here, take. It's some material you can study and review to help you make your choice." - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
for a moment that sounded quite... unusual
Thanks to Solus, he was also able to keep the female staff under his watch, and when not even they noticed anything strange, Lith could finally sigh with relief. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
censored it then proceeded to spell out the whole word
'Holy cr*ap, her leg is badly cracked. It's a miracle she was still able to walk without a limp.' Lith thought. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
he did in the forest, while also using shroud and some other spell..
A minor mistake would make him float upside down or make him spin like in a washing machine. Lith never managed to float properly, let alone move. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
he trusts his entire family, he even said it..
'You trust no one.' Solus's voice changed to a flat tone. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Armored_Rob_4K
complaints = criticism, criticism turns to positive change, and positive change means more readers
The time for the spring festival was nearing, and Lith wanted some extra pocket money to buy something nice for his parents and sisters. Trion was still a stranger to him. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
spelling that wrong could have changed everything..
The door was open and once inside, Lith recognized the familiar feeling of a doctor's waiting room. The door led to a single huge room that smelled of medicinal herbs and incense. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Lavender_Elski
Yeah but i'm a very grammar rounded person so I notice mistakes a lot. B)
Form side to side it was filled with counters that were stationed with workers. Just as Vorden had said. There were blacksmiths here who could forge equipment. Shops that sold little gadgets and things such as Beast bait. And even a quest bored. - Ronin_Sheldon2yrReplied to Spore_Imortal
true, her abilities surpass theirs
"That wasn't for you, I just hate it when guys think they're better than us, better show people like that their place." - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
Fish Fille
'Fire Guild,' Gravis concluded as he watched them with narrow eyes fille with killing intent. They were also twenty people with the same power levels as the original arrivals of the Lightning Guild. 'Another four in the fifth level and another one in the sixth.' - Ronin_Sheldon2yrCommented
Overuse of commas my friend.
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