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Darkness0109dReplied to sugar0077As the assimilation finished, Gwen let out a breath she was holding in, as she held up her hands, and clenched her fist, as 3 long claws swished out of her knuckle area. She didn't even so much as flinch at the pain, as the knowledge she held before was already enough to resist pain, but with Wolverine's memories and knowledge? It was safe to say that pain couldn't really affect her, not anymore at least.- Darkness01010dReplied to Darkness010
After reading the chapter, I have another thing to add. This could explain how he is getting her memories, emotions, and feelings infused into him as his soul is being judged and why only her memories showed up and not his.
I looked at the scene with a feeling of remembrance. It was not one born from my own soul but my body. I was witnessing the memories of Asia Argento, the girl whose body I had possessed. - Darkness01010dCommented
is her soul dormant in the body? or is it just gone or infused into his soul? It would be a good idea to simply include the pieces of her soul, or perhaps her entire soul being fused with the MC, who is the dominant soul, causing her soul to simply transform into energy to power his. This also allows you to explain how his soul is utilizing that body while not being rejected and how he has her sacred gear but not her memories. But it's up to you as it is your story.
I looked at the scene with a feeling of remembrance. It was not one born from my own soul but my body. I was witnessing the memories of Asia Argento, the girl whose body I had possessed. - Darkness01013dCommented
Ah... so that's what happened...
The only reason why I didn't see him the first time was that Rias said that Griselda knocked him out from his lewd comments. The moment he saw Griselda, he shouted that her breasts were massive. The nun had endured the comments toward her, but when Issei began to hear Rias mention that they were meeting me, he asked if I had big breasts, too. - Darkness01015dCommented
I am confused. Is the entire story an AU because Issei met Asia as she was arriving in town with her luggage? Issei was already a reincarnated devil with his Boosted Gear, and Raynare killed him before Asia arrived. Asia's death merely awakened his Longinus completely. So, is this an AU in which Issei is essentially non-existent, or did Rias not bring him because she was afraid he would do something perverted to Asia, thus prompting Gridelda to come and punish her for bringing Issei, or did Gridelda put him in a coma after he did something perverted to her?
Ch 12 Governor of Grigori - Darkness01021dReplied to Sloro
Ah... like The Grim Knight.
"I also have no problems with that" Bruce said with a small smile, while inwardly thanking the fact that he wouldn't have to chase off would-be boyfriends from his daughter. - Darkness01023dReplied to Darkness010
But... seeing how the author made the third kazekage do the exchange where he gives Tsunade and Dan for Pakura and Rase. I see that the jutsu is rare or non-existent in this story. Why risk exchanging when you can just kill Tsunade and Dan and just resurrect Rase and Pakura later.
Pakura of the Scorch Release, Dead. - Darkness01023dCommented
Hmm... She technically is not dead yet due to the [Kishotensei: Self-Destruct Technique] (One's Own Life Reincarnation) being a thing. So if the author does not bring this up, then that is a major plot hole. Especially if the third kazakage does not retrieve her body to sacrifice someone to resurrect her.
Pakura of the Scorch Release, Dead. - Darkness0101mthCommented
There was a DC Marvel comic featuring Wanda in the DC universe. You might want to check that out if you haven't already. Wanda in the DC universe seems stronger. It might be due to Chaos magic being stronger and wilder in the DC universe than the Marvel universe.
Ch 1 Prologue (Start Of Everything) - Darkness0101mthReplied to Darkstar11051999
I think the author is using the concept from Avengers Assemble's Infinity Stones, which can corrupt the user and also be drained of all their power. But the author is adding to it in that the power stone is the only one with infinite power.
Some constructive criticism would be helpful. Please let me know if I made any mistakes, and I'll fix them. I'm only human, I make mistakes. - Darkness0102mthReplied to javi299
Well, she has no background in this world, other than the Church... So, any slave trader could just say she was a war slave and no one would question it.
As Miyumi's eyes closed, she caught a glimpse of a red dress and a white thigh that pocked out from the slit. A woman with this world's equivalent to a cigarette in her mouth slowly walked over. "To think you would go this far. It seems I won't get much money from you except for maybe that girl. But to think the church would let this girl escape…." - Darkness0104mthCommented
Will adding vampire blood with other blood create a taste similar to grilled or fried chicken?
Shizuku was not sure how she felt about this new discovery. She really did not want to know which part of a vampire's body tasted like chicken. But this did teach her a few things. One, she could easily make weapons. Two, her fingernails were razor sharp. Three, she tasted like chicken. Four, she healed almost instantly after cutting herself. And lastly, five, she felt no pain from being cut. - Darkness0104mthReplied to Darkness010Ch 13 Author Notes
- Darkness0104mthReplied to kakkakaCh 13 Author Notes