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Literally in Chapter 1, he says, "Hey there, my misguided brother. Pulling a knife on someone in the middle of the night is a bad habit. You might accidentally wound your pure soul." Now, I know Spider-Man quips, but this? This isn't a quip. It's preaching. And worse than that, it just isn't funny. Compare this line to a classic: "My weakness. Small knives. Anything but knives!" One line sounds like someone who needs several good kicks in the pants, the other sounds like someone I would enjoy reading a story about.

I only finished the first two chapters, but thats all I need to. In chapter two, Orion says the system is inefficient and then backtracks from his completely reasonable stance. I don't want to read a story where the main character has an annoying Navi-esque character following him around giving useless rewards for 200 chapters. The system gives rewards for 'hidden achievements' but in reality it just wants him to cause chaos with no guarantee for rewards. At the very least if it gave a daily achievement thing, even if it felt like he was a system-slave, that would at least be interesting since he could choose himself, rather than need to stumble into it.

Salem is part grimm, right? Would that mean that a summoning contract would work on her?

I just love how many knowledge bombs he drops without care. Like, sure, he could easily be saying it to mess with them, but to say it with such conviction, at the very least, you have to assume he has a reason to believe what he's saying.

Given he's a transcendant human, it kind of makes sense that women would be less averse to such a thing. He's basically the perfect man/mate for any humanoid species, not to mention his powers and unlimited wealth. As for letting him date others, Sharon lived in an apocalypse, and Donna is from Greek mythos, so I doubt either cares about monogamy, and any subsequent women likely won't either, since he'll have been dating multiple women by then.

Honestly, despite how useless they probably are, I'm glad they're back. They got done real dirty by dying literally moments after spawning.

An amazing chapter, as usual.

Reasoning. Tang San destroyed Slaughter City, so no one else could obtain the Death God Domain and have a chance at Godhood, while Zhuqing just finds fallen disgusting and wants them gone.

Right... Because cowardice is refusing to let something that will kill you if it hits, hit you... Remind me again who's been hiding from Spirit Hall like a sewer rat?