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First, the Harem tag is simply a lie. Robin appeared in the early chapters; now, Kalifa appears around chapter 110. At the current rate things are going, it'll probably be another hundred chapters minimum before a harem is even close to forming. Next, I have complaints about Robin. She leaves him, claiming her existence puts him in danger, yet now that his bounty is several times higher than hers, that thought hasn't changed. Right now, it seems like she'll only return by the time he's a Yonko-level fighter, which is dumb. Lastly, the writing feels very boring, like it's deliberately avoiding writing in canon characters, and there's little reason for that. Even more so when the writing already feels translatey enough. It comes off as wanting a One Piece story, without actually wanting it to be about One Piece itself.
The fact that he literally named it Umit backward as a middle finger is truly hilarious.
I honestly don't blame him for going after the two of them. They're both attractive, and he has no reason not to help them. As for the problem of his 'ruining their futures', that would be debatable. Because we know what happens, we could say that, but to them, their lives suck and could get them killed at any point.
Sane is relative.
True, but since he informed them of another kingdom they could rule over (sort of), while also being from outside their world, he’s somewhat immune to that kind of fate altering
He’s the more relaxed child, and he’d only say that in private.
Actually, I’m pretty sure she’s quite young, about in her early 20s by her first appearance
Shanks is probably gonna blow a gasket when he realizes his daughter is on the same ship as what the news is calling a future 'Big Daddy'.
So Reiju is already yandere for him?
Literally in Chapter 1, he says, "Hey there, my misguided brother. Pulling a knife on someone in the middle of the night is a bad habit. You might accidentally wound your pure soul." Now, I know Spider-Man quips, but this? This isn't a quip. It's preaching. And worse than that, it just isn't funny. Compare this line to a classic: "My weakness. Small knives. Anything but knives!" One line sounds like someone who needs several good kicks in the pants, the other sounds like someone I would enjoy reading a story about.